Blinded by Truth
by Heathyre A Perara
Thursday, September 01, 2005
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This is actually a re-write of my Poem "Observations" to Fit the Poetry syllabic styling of a "Whitney" (created by Betty Ann Whitney) has exactly seven lines. Syllable Pattern: 3, 4, 3, 4, 3, 4, 7. For this poetry assignment I needed to make a "Double Whitney" and follow the pattern twice.
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Within Lies,
I can find Truth.
Dreams, within
Reality.
Delusions,
In Non-Fiction...
When Seeing is Believing
Within Truth
I can find Lies
Dreams Wasted
Reality
Is Tainted
I close my Eyes
By Believing I Can See
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
4/3/2006 |
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Heath
Intoxicating and alluring write..
Your Muse is soaring...:)
I detest lies..
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Chandrakanth Natekar |
3/11/2006 |
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| Nice |
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
12/22/2005 |
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| Very well done. |
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| Reviewed by Danielle Mundy |
9/1/2005 |
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| hmmm..very interesting observation ;) I have to say I agree for the most part..with in every lie there is some truth and with in every truth there is a small lie...I think this is mainly because people's perceptions of the truth often vary, so what may be true to one is a lie to another and vice versa :D |
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