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|Reviewed by Ed J.
|Wonderful poem! Very well written, smooth reading and visual. Only on question, was the use of "You" instead of "your" intensional in the next to last stanza?
Stay well and keep writing.
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|Beautiful words. Enjoyed this very much.|
|Reviewed by Poetic Rose
|If only my knight I could keep
alas my eyes wudst not now weep,
my heart be broken thus in two
because this lady dared to say
I LOVE YOU...(©chris)
Enjoyed reading..great words shared..what ever happened to those knights so bold..thank you for sharing..Chris
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|You have created a wonderful place. Great write.|