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Everyone needs a Knight in shining armor.
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Come my child, and take my hand. Lead me to our enchanted land. Where Princes, Queens and Wizards rule. Where fiery eyes steal the soul.
Where water is your passion. The sun is your god. Give me thine hand and through this life we shall trod.
Through pain, death, and sorrow. Our love will carry the 'morrow. Waves crash the ocean blue. Eyes ever seaching for you. Piercing the darkest night or brightest day Your soul cries out as I hear you say.
A thousand warriors at the gates. A King on his throne! The power of your lust I've always known. Come to me my prince and take me away. A battle is coming. Will you enter the fray?
On the breath of the waves I feel your power. Growing stronger, overwhelming, with each passing hour. Your time has come great knight. Bring forth your shield and sword. Vanquish my attacking horde!
Blue eyes rapture you soul. Life's blood flows through sand cold. A love I've gained. A life I've given.
A dream too real. A love too deep. A passion to seal. A KNIGHT to keep.
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
1/24/2008 |
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Wonderful poem! Very well written, smooth reading and visual. Only on question, was the use of "You" instead of "your" intensional in the next to last stanza?
Stay well and keep writing.
Ed |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
9/20/2007 |
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| Beautiful words. Enjoyed this very much. |
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| Reviewed by Poetic Rose |
1/13/2007 |
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If only my knight I could keep
alas my eyes wudst not now weep,
my heart be broken thus in two
because this lady dared to say
I LOVE YOU...(©chris)
Enjoyed reading..great words shared..what ever happened to those knights so bold..thank you for sharing..Chris
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
3/13/2004 |
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| You have created a wonderful place. Great write. |
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