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| Reviewed by Linda Roman |
6/11/2006 |
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| Well done! I enjoyed. thanks |
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
6/11/2006 |
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| Very, very nice, indeed! I enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/7/2006 |
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Oh my goodness
Interesting contemplations, representative of such much more
Intelligent musings, so far reaching
well done
pax A |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
6/6/2006 |
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Write on!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
6/6/2006 |
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| I'm too much of a realist and cynic to worry about if "they" know they are being watched and written about, but I am enough of a romantic to absolutely llove this poem of nature's voyeurism. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/6/2006 |
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This very insightful, Theresa; and it incites the reader to think. Well done. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/6/2006 |
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Consumate skill weaving this beauty, Theresa; a joy to see, and to read; thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
6/6/2006 |
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The observer becomes the observed.....:D
The spider weaves his web with consummate precision and skill...nothing is left to chance, and all the devices are primed and ready for use...
Theresa, we can learn so much from nature, and just by being in the eternal flow of the Universe we can achieve all our aims and aspirations.
Wonderful, metaphysical write..
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
6/5/2006 |
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| Interesting ending question to an experience of where the mind wanders as it observes life as it is. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/5/2006 |
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| insightful observation detailed brilliantly ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/5/2006 |
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This is a fantastic poem TJ! Those last few lines really make it soar! I love the descriptive work ,like a word painting, the images are great!Good to read you again!
Love,
eT |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
6/5/2006 |
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You have left the poem with a good question.
The most important thing is that you have observed the spider's and you see that it's repairing its web. What skills it takes for the spider! Sometimes, it does need a good observer to appreciate what the spider has weaved.
A wonderful poem! Thank you for sharing!
~ SMA
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| Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader) |
6/5/2006 |
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Teri, your works is always excellent..
Xxx dove |
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