|Reviewed by 000 000
|Fabulous! Your words tell of a spiritual and believing person|
|Reviewed by Michael Guy
|This is the 2nd poem I've read of yours that feels much like my own voice & situation, it's almost uncanny! A terrific verse in style, rhyme and incredible impact. My own situation: I too do all these creative things yet, seem to go nowhere, feel like my life is wasted. I meditate yet feel like I'm deaf to the inner Voice - and I'm busy living sparse, feeding abandoned cats.... Well it goes on. But I can't put it into a poem like you...
I hope you come through your medical trial without a hitch.
blessings, prayers for you - michael
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Great image and a lovely penning!!
LOve and Hugs,
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|A beautiful and well written poem,take care
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|A wonderful poem that captures life's purgatory midpoints where we wait for some great occurrence we think will fulfill our lives; yet, we must remember that everything we put into life is what we will get out of it. I rather love that meditative relaxation in the woods while I observe the world around me.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A deep felt poem of yearning for answers,we all go through
Show your love and believe,Creator does the rest...
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|I often feel I should be doing oh so much more...as time is a breath...great write!
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Sometimes many of us feel something is missing in our lives. Its hard to find the elusive dream. Eventually it happens for some and they find peace and solace with in and accept what is....Great poem.....M|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I wish to hide within the woods wasting all time
Lay upon the grass just watching clouds drift by
Smelling of the fresh drawn rain dancing all about
Still something is missing before my time runs out
These sentiments somehow feel very familiar to me, Theresa. Sometime when I close my eyes I can feel time flow past my face like a breeze. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|I think this one captures the feeling of aging and life passing by so quickly. I often feel and it seems the older I get the more I feel that I am missing somthing but I just keep trying to do the best I can, that's all we can do.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Just keep on doing what you're doing; be still, and know that He is God. He will not give you more than you can bear: just trust in Him. :) Especially when He seems far removed and silent. Well done, my friend.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Bonnie May
|What a thought provoking write Theresa...you'll hear what your spirit wants when you mind is at rest. You'll awaken with a thought that you have no idea from whense it came. Follow it and you'll find your destiny. Love and hugs, Bonnie|