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| Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang |
10/28/2006 |
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Beautiful and such sweet sentiment!
One special lady she is!
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/24/2006 |
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Spectacular, Peter; very well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/24/2006 |
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for these heartfelt moments, will never come again
and we are touched, by a power we can't comprehend <---Soul food.
Wonderful poetry, with tremendous images and metaphors..
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| Reviewed by Taylor Ryan |
10/23/2006 |
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Pure romance Peter. One of your best!
Love,
Taylor~ |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
10/23/2006 |
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You stir the heartstrings with your romantic verse, Peter. Love abounds is all your words, that become melodeous in the reading!
Beautifully written...
Micke |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
10/23/2006 |
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Be still my heart. You make us feel, see, hear, smell. . .
k n o w l o v e i s i n t h e a i r. Thank you, kind sir.
Thank you. 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/23/2006 |
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Sir Peter the catcher of moments ...
I saw in my minds eye, you, with a butterfly net catching a most delightful moment in time. And guess what?
"oscillating within my atoms" has got to be one of the most unique images I have read in a while. What a spectacular confirmation of love for your one and only. Like fine wine flowing over the pallet.
Light and wisdom ...
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
10/23/2006 |
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This is as romantic as they come, Dear Peter!
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
10/22/2006 |
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Romantic You Beyond All Expectations...
Your Friend, TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/22/2006 |
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| A lovely write. |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
10/22/2006 |
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About as captivatingly intimate and lyrically absorbing as a beautiful poem and a beautiful moment gets:-)
Aberjhani |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/22/2006 |
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"and you are all, that matters to me in this world"
I know these sentiments well, Peter. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
10/22/2006 |
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| ah, nicely done |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/22/2006 |
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Something happened on that beach that touched your soul.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/22/2006 |
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A true romance tribute that must melt the heart of the recipiant if she is any kind of a romantic at all. What a beautiful tribute.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
10/22/2006 |
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'the tanged perfume of the seaweed, floods my being and soul'
The first scent that stirs my senses when I arrive on the Isle of Arran is the gorgeous smell of seaweed. Ah, if only that could be bottled - eaten right enough - but bottled.
This idyllic poem translated me from my London home back to the beach at Morar rather than Arran. Beautiful white sands that seem to stretch beyond the horizon. You've given me waves of imagery to surf upon, Peter. Do I exaggerate? Reading this and looking at the image - why does Jura come to mind also - supplied makes me pine for home. No I don't exaggerate.
'for these heartfelt moments, will never come again'
I hope the sentiments of this line don't ring true with me just yet.
Thanks for taking me along the shore.
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| Reviewed by Denise Contreras |
10/22/2006 |
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This is wonderful Peter thanks for this.
Hugs Angela |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/22/2006 |
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Oh Peter
I agree with Jude and all the others
bravo!
pax A |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/22/2006 |
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the divine music of love, is oscillating within my atoms
And you convey it to the page very well, Peter! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/22/2006 |
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Awesome...just awesome!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Miss Pandora |
10/22/2006 |
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| Oh Peter, your strength of spirit and the inner peace you gain from that is astounding. You share so much...bless you, Shine on Warrior! Love and deep respect to you as ever, Panda :) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/22/2006 |
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| this poem is certainly not beyond my expectations of your remarkable work and profound insight ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/21/2006 |
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Peter the glorious nature of this poem is enhanced by the beauty of the picture, and the awesome way you capture the essence of the moment! You are another of the prize poets we have here at the den that consistently pen remarkable poetry ! Thank you for sharing.
Shalom!
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| Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger |
10/21/2006 |
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| so lovely, Peter. Mary |
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| Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot |
10/21/2006 |
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Ditto Vic
;)Ch'erie |
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/21/2006 |
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| Beautiful amalgamation of nature and love laced with romance. Victor |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/21/2006 |
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| Beautiful work , peter |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
10/21/2006 |
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Enchanting!
Blessings, Rhonda |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/21/2006 |
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Peter,
This is just breathlessly beautiful!!!!! I love every word of this!!!!!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
10/21/2006 |
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Your last line says it all for me... lovely work Peter!
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/21/2006 |
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Ain't love grand? This is another lovely romantic poem, Peter. The feelings are right there for us to see -- you do that so well.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/21/2006 |
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| That's how love captures your heart and weaves into one with hers. You are a true romantic. |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen (Reader) |
10/21/2006 |
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simply beautiful, Peter~
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/21/2006 |
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Your heart is rare and dedicated purity Peter. I'm very proud to be a part of where you are.
This is tender and beautiful and although I can't have it in my life in the present I can feel the closeness through your pens. I feel the past then and it's good to keep warm by our memories sometimes.
Love and peace,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/21/2006 |
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Peter,
So beautiful and gracefull these romantic expressions.. Blended with nature it is truly beautiful....
Light & Peace
Love,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by K. Mulroney |
10/21/2006 |
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| beautiful! |
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