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| Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills |
11/3/2006 |
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| This is a very wise piece...full of excellent advice from one who obviously knows his stuff. Blessings, Michelle |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/29/2006 |
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Listen to the sounds of silence. Each generation has its trials, and nature continues to perfect.
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
10/27/2006 |
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Ah Peter, so wonderfully written and true, now this is lovely and excellent advice.
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/26/2006 |
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There is much wisdom in what you express via your verses here, Peter. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia |
10/26/2006 |
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Peter,
Another superb delivery!
"betwixt the natural and supernatural, you will always
see me glean"
Your ability to keep everything properly balanced, makes you the
king of survivors -and poetry- that you are!
And I heartily agree with Dr. Lilly, regarding the condition of our condition...
Love&Blessings, Rhonda
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| Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic |
10/25/2006 |
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just stay light hearted every time
great ending! Love it!
Vesna:) |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/25/2006 |
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| Light hearts enliven the soul and energise the sorrounding aura, augmenting the sphere of light and bathing the world in sunshine, Peter... as does the acute observation and wisdom in this write. Laughter brings health to the bones, like birdsong. Go West Young Man!! I shall soon be at Lands' End, but life is DEFINITELY more paced with time and civility shared among fellow journeymen down here in deepest Doorrrrrrrrrrseeeeett. Yep, know well that of which you speak - eloquently. TY K xx |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/25/2006 |
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| Well done ,peter |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
10/25/2006 |
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Good advice Peter. The poem suits the wise quote rather well.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Hale |
10/25/2006 |
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A fantastic write about creeping decadence and nature repelling it. I would guess nature will win in the end, when encroaching society is underground and those who kept the light in sight reign. Well done.
Peace. Joyce |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
10/25/2006 |
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| Attitude is tops, very wise stuff here.. |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
10/25/2006 |
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A cancer has eaten away our social and moral fabric of society as it becomes more divisive everyday, misery and suffering are predominant...yet there is always light...this poem guides toward that light, thank you Peter. Excellent.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
10/25/2006 |
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amidst the chaos and anarchy, of 21 st suburbia
maintaining my grip on reality, is a daily overture
Indeed it is, for many of us these days, Peter, but you do it very well.
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| Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader) |
10/24/2006 |
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Very deep with food for thought. Your parting shot is a great one. Victor
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/24/2006 |
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You are a boon to all who lose direction Sir Peter! You are steadfast and faithful even in the midst of a world gone anok!
Thank you for letting your light lead!
Shalom,
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2006 |
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your compass is directed in many directions, Peter ... guiding, teaching, leading to the light while echoing off walls that have no shape but house the spirit in motion ...
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
10/24/2006 |
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A phenomenal write, Peter. Lighthearted jesting in there, but serious, too. Wonderful advice for us all.
Love and respect,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by J M |
10/24/2006 |
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Yes life can be a DRAG............... the world around us if we allowed would swallow us up in its grafiti, thinking, and actions... But if we travel light by the Holy Spirit then we will rise above to a new plane where we exisit with God not of this world or caught in this world.. Message here for me is powerful Dearest Peter....... Wonderful work...
Blessings , Peace, Love,
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/24/2006 |
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Well said old friend and a great capture of your subject highlighted with the graphic.
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
10/24/2006 |
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The job of a "Light Stepper" is to leave a little posphorous behind. You've done an excellent job on doing just that, Peter. An awesome poem!
Where was the picture taken?
Shalom,
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
10/24/2006 |
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Good advise only ;comes from someone with a great attitude Peter, such as yourself :)
enjoyed this as always..........pax Anita :) |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
10/24/2006 |
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Wouldn't it be wonderfully if we were all equipped with that moral compass? Unfortunately so many or not and sadly that they aren't is not always of their doing...but this does not make it easier to watch the deterioration.... wonderful piece!
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
10/24/2006 |
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| Lighthearted it is, my man, even in the darkest of night, the howling of the wind, the shifting of the earth's sxis, the Raven knock, knock, knocking on my door, will I forever and always be . . . Lighthearted. Marvelous poetry. Better message. |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/24/2006 |
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Sir Peter ...
The internal rot has manifested itself on the surface. It is a rampant disease that is afflicting every walk of life on every level of affluence, decadence, and poverty. The threads of the fabric are unraveling at an uprecedented rate.
And aside from these perfunctory thoughts I can neither add nor subtract from Daivies biting insights below.
Light hearted is getting more and more to be a discipline garnered in the glow of arcadian contentment - not in the cities.
In fraternity and vision ...
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/24/2006 |
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Great advice at the end....thanks!!
love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Tactfully Naive |
10/24/2006 |
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I have strolled that same path, Peter. I look beyond the graffiti to the mentality that put it there and wonder, 'why have we decayed in morality rather than advanced?' Where was this mentality when i was a kid in th 1960s? Where did it spring from? No such distortion has impacted upon the ant, it still functions exactly the same with the same mentality intact. Likewise with the Ivy, still climbing the wall as ever and in the exact same manner. It is only the human creature that has created a world that seems to consist of wall to wall conflict. Jesus tells us not to be troubled but to look up for our redemption draws near. That's our hope, and with that we 'just stay light hearted every time'.
Thanks for a poem in which I found myself walking alongside you. |
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| Reviewed by Rusty Daily |
10/24/2006 |
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What better advice could someone get, or give. Well Written
Rusty |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/24/2006 |
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| In this day and age one has to keep a tight grip on the controls. |
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