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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/23/2005 |
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An excellent piece of poetry
Nordette
William, .....Peace & Love |
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| Reviewed by Pier Tyler |
10/21/2005 |
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| another awesome write from a moxie lady. |
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| Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi |
8/8/2005 |
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| That's a truth so sad...eloquently beautiful in expression (and shared) |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
7/24/2005 |
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Replete with metaphorical excellence this is throughly absorbing and totally engrossing superb work dear lady.
Paul;-) |
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| Reviewed by Evelyn Simon |
7/23/2005 |
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My dear sweet Nordette, it's always a pleasure to read your words.
Thanks so much for displaying them.
Great write, girl. :o) |
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| Reviewed by Constance Gotsch |
7/23/2005 |
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| excellent metaphor. |
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| Reviewed by Katy Walsvik |
7/23/2005 |
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My god, Nordetten, how you can absorb me into, not just a piece, itself, but into the expressions of it, the poetry of it... sometimes, I just collapse, entirely, marveling at your very human, very brave insights.
Oh, yes, I do what we commenters love to say, "relate"... but, with this one and so many of yours, I'm stunned more by the writing. I can see and feel the agonizing metaphors you offer. You, dear madam, are a poet's poet, indeed. katy xox |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
7/22/2005 |
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If we wait for the tending hand of the gardener, surely we will all wilt upon the vine...or was that the knight in shining armor...no matter, the end result is the same. Excellent metaphor-rich verses, Nordette. Awesome work!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
7/21/2005 |
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Outstanding Nordette...I must agree with the rest, excellent metaphors!
Peace, Carole |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
7/21/2005 |
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Romantic Wild N Off The Wall Write On Write!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/21/2005 |
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Most excellent delivery Nordette!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/21/2005 |
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Poignancy lingers on each word, this left me feeling sad. Powerful use of metaphors, poetic language; one of your best!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :( |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/21/2005 |
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I can hardly comment! The depth you reach is fathomless,I'm in awe of your gift for metaphor and honesty, and agree with the others!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Mushi |
7/21/2005 |
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Poignant use of metaphors - very well delivered. The poem speaks in volumes about so many aspects of life. Excellent writing, Nordette!
God bless,
Sandie. |
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| Reviewed by * Aberjhani |
7/21/2005 |
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| IN ALL SINCERITY, WISDOM, paints romantic tragedy on such a grand scale that it stands shoulder to shoulder with some of the best romantic poetry ever written. Its power comes beautifully from its brave visualization of failed hope and desire even while the soul of the poem itself continues to sing the significance of its virtually unbearable pain. A small and very worthy masterpiece by a giant and masterful talent. |
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| Reviewed by Brian Pellerino |
7/21/2005 |
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Nordette,
Exquisite longing. You trap your metaphors so expertly, so cunningly, that they don't even know that they're caught. If this is allegorical (and I suspect it is - after all - we write what we know), it is not prophecy. Surely one with your fathomless depth knows that a gardener will be along shortly.
Peace,
B |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/21/2005 |
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| Well, hell and say it again! Very astute observations AND just a damn fine write with so many metaphors the poem was like licking a triple-decker strawberry ice cream, or a cherry snow cone. The irony is heavy and oppressive and bears down upon the reader as you slowly begin to understand that the lonely bud is waiting in vain for that gardner. Superb writing, Nordette.. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/21/2005 |
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| Metaphorically symbolic delivering a powerful message - thank you for sharing this offering, Nordette. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
7/21/2005 |
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| Wise young lady are you...Well done... |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/21/2005 |
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| awesome |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
7/21/2005 |
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excellent yet again, nordette; very well done! brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
7/21/2005 |
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| excellent nordette, fits many women i'm sure... |
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