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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
1/4/2007 |
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| Oh the words of wisdom that flow here! Very touching, Holly |
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| Reviewed by H. Lena Jones |
10/10/2006 |
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Nordette, you're quite an accomplished poet. You have captured the essence of man's inhumanity to man quite well in this poem. Will he ever change? Not without repentance and a turning back to God.
I like the way you and Aberjhani support each other. You're a remarkable pair.
Thank you for visiting my site; much appreciated.
God Bless
Much love,
Lena
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
9/19/2006 |
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| Wonderful. When it comes to the 'true light', humanity is often lost in darkness... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
9/18/2006 |
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| Beautiful sonnet and ode for the bloodied soul of mankind. May the peace of Parnassus drop as dew from poets pens to quicken our thirst for restitution and revival. Inspired rhyming, Nordette. LOL K xx |
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| Reviewed by Paul Williams |
9/18/2006 |
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A big Right ON! Sister...too much darkness not enough light, thank the heavens for your sagacious luminance dearest Nordette, your words are a beacon for truth seekers the world over sing 'em loud, sing 'em proud. This totally Rocks!
Blessings
Paul;-) Looking to invade New Jersey 2007 lol. |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
9/18/2006 |
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Bravo, Nordette! A superb write that lifts one's soul in these distressing times.
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
9/15/2006 |
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Your title grabbed me, Nordette, with it's immediate timelessness, the 'O' Poetry', I think I mean.
I was not disappointed, rather, gratified, not so much for quality, that is your talent, but, for pathos, and word-smithing and syllabic placement. Lovely in rhyme and timely in content.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
9/14/2006 |
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Mmmmmmmmmmmmmm, I hear the melody playin softly in my head. What a gorgeous piece of poetry, Nordette, done in your own inimitable style! Yes. I'm saving this one. Beautiful!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
9/14/2006 |
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Very well written Nordette!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/14/2006 |
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I join my voice to the plea expressed in your verses here, Nordette. To me, this is a wonderful sonnet. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
9/14/2006 |
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Good one, Nordette; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
9/14/2006 |
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Lordy, well written and Oh so true.
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
9/14/2006 |
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We all pray for peace and curse our neighbors, we are an interesting and angry lot as a whole, arent's we? Our ire flares up so easily on both a personal and an international level leaving us waring on every front. We are going to have to find a way to elevate the human spirit if we are ever going to know the comfort of living in a harmonious world. Excellent cry for peace and understanding, Nordette.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/14/2006 |
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| A truly marvelous poem, Nordette. Blessed are the Peacemakers, and the true Poets. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
9/13/2006 |
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Prophecy as an inspired message or a coined prediction can be enforced to become history or can be changed. The receiver and the deliver will have the credit for making a direful future become magnificent and splendorous one or to make a life of bonanza become starvation and serfdom. It is up to the leaders of the planet to decide, and it is up to the people to aye, aye for them or nay, nay, and show them that their power can only remain under peoples will.
When a cloud of love fell on the tree of wisdom, and left a dew of bliss on the leaf of Your heart, Poet ~ this composition formed as an ENGLISH SONNET ~ was written to be enjoyed and studied through the millennia by those that enjoy The Major Art. A poetic excellence to enrich the treasure of The American Fine Letters.
Thank You for posting this poetic flower, "O' Poetry, Sing Sweetly".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by J Daniels |
9/13/2006 |
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| this reminded me of something I once write----exceptional work!!! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
9/13/2006 |
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One of your best Nordette! This is glorious poetry with a theme that
touches everyone. Love every line and especially the last couplet!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
9/13/2006 |
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isn't it sad how many of the influential children of god are killed by man ...
excellent poem, Nordette ... |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
9/13/2006 |
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| AMEN!!!!! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
9/13/2006 |
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I feel like you wrote this for me Nordette
ty from the bottom of my heart.....its a keeper
pax Anita |
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| Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader) |
9/13/2006 |
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This is incredibly awesome..Nordette, I am tracking your work but the den is not sending me the e-mail knowtice, lol..There is a glitch in their system..hhhmm..
Xxx dove |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
9/13/2006 |
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a beautiful plea...
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart |
9/13/2006 |
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| Poetry should always be a sweet refuge. Our own personal worlds of peace. |
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