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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
9/27/2009 |
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Thought provoking...very nicely done!
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/5/2009 |
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| You caught me & you told the world of my enjoyment with tree & me conversations...now that the world knows maybe I can be released from my rubber room...;-) e |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
2/5/2009 |
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Nordette;
Another excellent poem, thank you for sharing!
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
1/30/2009 |
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a wisp of sadness to this with a ray of hope
bill |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/12/2008 |
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I enjoyed this outstanding poem
Peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/11/2008 |
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You pick up where you left off, Nordette... ...you've got me thinking. It is nice to read you again, mon amie. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
12/10/2008 |
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Far Better To Dream Of What You Can Be(come) Than Not Dream At All,i.e.Without Dreams (Imagination) You Have Nothing To Dream Of Not Even Your Own Success...
Etal: Success Is Not Making Billion$ (Being Greedy $ Wealthy)-Success Is Whence You Have Accomplished What You Set Out To Do Even If It Takes A Lifetime To Accomplish It...
TRASK
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
12/10/2008 |
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LOL does summerization negate a review Nordette :)
I like this especially this stanza
We make peace with the night by seconds
and widowless thought that keeps
eyes to the ceiling.
to me, the old man and the tree represent the continuity of life, and the searching for more.........
pax A
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
12/10/2008 |
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| Excellent....good to read you again Nordette....2009...lol..your ahead of me girl :) !! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
12/10/2008 |
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Welcome home, you've been missed!!!! This is keenly penned: no wastd words or motion. Favorite line:
"... We make peace with the night by seconds
and windowless thought ...." <---boy, I've been there. LOL
Well done, mon ami.
(((HUGS))) and love, and Merry Christmas, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Sara Coslett |
12/10/2008 |
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Sometimes we dream of what can be too. Wonder-ful and -filled poem and great title to match! ~ Sara
(P.S. - I never did get to ask about your name.) |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
12/10/2008 |
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An excellent poem you have written,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/10/2008 |
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Great write, Nordette; so nice to read you again!! You've been missed, (((GIRL)))! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D XOXOX0X0
May you have a very Merry Christmas and a happy, healthy, prosperous 2009!! |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
12/10/2008 |
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Wise ponderings... "Old Man Speaking With Tree" sings.
I salute You, Poet.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/9/2008 |
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Nordette is back,with a gem to capture our senses...
So good to have you here, hope you stay and play;-)
Love and hugs,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/9/2008 |
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we dream of what can't be until we realize we are dreaming ...
good stuff, girl - glad to read you again ;) |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
12/9/2008 |
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| perhaps that is what makes dreaming so inticing... |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
12/9/2008 |
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Wonderful to see you back on the board, Nordette...I've missed your poetry which always shares some insight on life and its branching of values...what you have here is a poem of many offshoots analagous to roots and dreams which can become root bound and stifle our growth...love determined, we can scrape the bark and peel our aloneness away...counting tree rings tells the age of how long we have been without what we truly want...and want to be. Happy Holidays to you and your family...
Sage |
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