|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|and oh the words echo - menacing
the heart already full already hurting still
yet playful of the thoughts and words
eased in by your p-o-e-t-r-y
so glad i stopped in
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I'm here, Nordette. LOL!!! Seriously. This is so nice. Love and hugs,
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Wherever he is, keep him near. Stunning poem Nordette.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Positively undone by the beauty, the power in these lines - well done! Agree with Karen: you've been missed. And are. =]
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Nordette - Enjoyed this love poem that grows into the spiritual. Love that last stanza:
You kindred spirit breathing
like a Rumi stanza
resurrection to a withered vine.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful writing, m'dear Nordette; so good to see you posting here! You've been missed! Welcome home! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Darlin Nordette, how I feel this - and you! Kindred spirits we may be, too, but I'll refrain from leaving my calling card on your collar a la Sage! :)) Must be the coquettishness, that adrenalin rush and coltish kick that kick-asses our life into overdrive. Man-in-my-mind could well be Man-in-the-moon, but his effects are universal and totally real. I do so adore your games of Noughts and Crosses... Hope you're doin good down there in Brooklyn - keep puffin! K xxooxx|
|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|These days, it's good to see a romance poem from you...wish I could see a nametag pinned on his collar "Ms. Nordette Adams your lips have been here"...I know a man that knows you that likes Rumi...nice thoughts here, Nordette...I've missed you...be well.