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|Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
|Very lovely write.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I am totally in love with a woman like this; she does not wear makeup or anything; she does not have to. She's also hurting me more than anyone ever has. So I can relate to your verses. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
true love the realness here
so many (men&women) working to get "that look"
instead of whats real
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Well written Dave!!
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I'm sure that there are view points like this for men as well.
Many men who lead a nonsensical life looking for the perfect mate or soulmate; or some who are playboys, as they get old, they are loneliest men on earth.
When they get old and everyone is away, or when they get old and even has a lot of so-called friend around them, but they are the loneliest creature on earth, and no one really loves them for who they are.
Anyway, not really sure why I'm saying all these things; but this is true.
Men feels more lonelier than women when they get old, used, and spent.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Reviewed by CJ Heck
|Interesting viewpoint, Dave. I'm sure there are women like this around -- narcissistic, vain, and caught up in themselves ... Again, interesting viewpoint, nicely done.