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President Bush said it was not time yet to put the troops on the ground.
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It was not time yet
It was not time yet. No food could be found For this little girl, One among many Little boys and girls With nothing between The sky and the ground Except the hunger And bombs all around. No food could be found For this little girl. We know not her name, How it is pronounced, Yet none are to blame For this stiffened child Who dreamt of heroes Coming from the West To help her sister, To help her brother, To help her father, To help her mother, Made helpless by war. And she died last night, She did not awake: There was no mistake. This is the reason: Nobody is to blame. It was not time yet, To feed innocent Children on the ground. For men do abhor An ugly ground war No heroes were found On the cold hard ground For this little girl. It was not time yet To do what was said Thought the President, When going to bed While one little girl, One among many Was starving to death On the cold hard ground, And in the morning They wound this child, In a clean white sheet, Laid her in the ground, Her body tightly bound, With a winding cord. No food could be found: It was not time yet. Heroes do no wrong: It was not time yet. So now she is dead And in Kandahar Bombs fell all around. Yes they did they did. No heroes could pause To honor the clause, To keep the promise, To feed the children: It was not time yet. Hundreds of children Lay dying, but now Civilized men are Afraid of the ground. It was not time yet For the alliance To honor the clause, To keep the promise To feed the children. Yet heroes were proud Flying through the air While this little girl, One among many, Was starving to death Waiting for them to come As they had promised: It was not time yet. First things must be first: We must be careful, We must have revenge. We must not get hurt. We are civilized. So the child was wound In a clean white sheet: Is this what God wants? Her father then asked, And looked at his child, Barely three foot long - Around her a throng Too sorry to weep. Many more will die Today and tonight, It is not time yet To save little girls For the unknown god Who did not want this Little girl to die For selfish defense. No food could be found For this little girl, One among many Little boys and girls With nothing between The sky and the ground Except the hunger And bombs all around. It was not time yet. Will it ever be?
By David Arthur Walters
During U.S. Bombing of Afghanistan
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| Reviewed by Regis Schilken |
7/26/2011 |
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No, It is never time.
God bless you and your poignant pocems.
rege schilken
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
9/26/2006 |
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| Very effective use of rhyme, David. The simplicity of the scheme you chose gave the piece more impact. ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by anne macdougall |
8/22/2006 |
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| very sad story' but well worth the read 'thank u for sharing anne |
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| Reviewed by Leonard Goslee |
5/23/2006 |
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"It Was Not Time Yet" says it all in one single page.
I hope that we can get wise and act before the "BLOOD-STORM FALLS".
Thank you for sharing your jewels.
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
5/16/2006 |
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This is a true depicting of today's leaders and their actions. This composition gives us the mirror of our society. It is a voice singing to the bells of Justice.
I have enjoyed the reading of "It Was Not Time Yet".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/16/2005 |
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David,
A powerful, thought provoking write; there is never a good time. I wish the powers that be were fighting this war and our troops could come home--enough is enough.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
If no one has welcomed you to AD, let me be among the first. You're among friends here. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/8/2005 |
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| Powerful and so very heart~felt`* |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/4/2005 |
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| A powerful statement made with your question posed, David. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks |
5/26/2005 |
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Whew! I think I was holding my breath all the way through this, David. Such a poignant poem, and much truth to it! We must back our service personal, tho - even if we have nothing good to say (and I don't) about the Dubya. I detest this war.
Micke |
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| Reviewed by June Thompson |
5/24/2005 |
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| Will it ever be the right time?? It never seems to be. It is too late for so many and they have yet to even know. This was a sad write, a truth told, an honest question to ask.... well done!!! |
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