What Hath God Wrought?
by
David Arthur Walters
Saturday, March 07, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A vision divine!
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Jennifer's Ass is so divine
A mortal man on viewing it
Might feel himself so blessed he can endure
Living in the city.
For he, commuting to and fro,
Always knows his ride
Takes him to see the Ass
Or from a fresh recollection
Of having seen it.
But now the Ass, alas,
Has moved to California.
Copyright 1995 R.B.C. Walters
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| Reviewed by David Arthur Walters |
3/11/2009 |
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Thanks for the comment and rewrite, Erin. I would pass it on to my dad (R.B.C. Walters), but he passed away last year. He polished his little poems for years and years. I told him the story about Jennifer way back. I just discovered that she did very well in California, and is happily married into one of the most prominent industrial families in the country! David
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
3/11/2009 |
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As an older poem, I have to think, David, it was/is passionate. Kinda like:
so divine
viewing it
can endure
in the city
to and fro
knows his ride
see the As
recollect
it
alas
California
Or, in a different format:
"Jennifer's ass,
a mortal man
might feel
living
for he
always knows
for he takes over
or steals the Ass.
From the New Collection,
of having to live it.
And, like an old ass, re-science recurves.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/10/2009 |
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I really enjoy reading this poem,this is excellent,take care
Edwin |
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