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Comfortable Asylum
by Felix LeRoy Perry

Monday, May 07, 2012
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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Three ku's but having problem with format...

Comfortable Asylum

Crystalline love rays

Shining in your twinkling eyes

Sugar coat my heart…

Music of your voice

A symphony to my ear

Lulls to elation…

Knowing that your heart

Beats in unison with mine

Makes my world revolve…

 


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Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/17/2012
Such a lovely place to be!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Walt Hardester 5/16/2012
If love be an asylum, Have me commited right away.
Nicely phrased Fee.

~W~
Reviewed by Richard King 5/12/2012
I'm not to sharp when it comes to ku's, but I know when kudos’ are called for and the time is now.

Nicely done. Dick
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 5/9/2012
I ordinarily do not very much like haiku. However in this case, the couplets blend together in a meaningful way, creating a message of some substance.

Ron
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 5/9/2012
Wonderful Cuz, they fit together very well.

Love ya face Cuz Hugs XOXOXO, Rose
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 5/9/2012
Very nice, my friend.
Reviewed by D. Vaineo 5/9/2012
Fee, Your Ku's seem to all fit together---N*i*c*e

Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila 5/8/2012
Enchantingly romantic, Fee!!! Love doesn't get any better than this!

Hugs,
Anna
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 5/8/2012
Fee, These melt together like honey, smooth and sweet...just beautiful~
Hugs,
Chrissie
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 5/8/2012
I see no problem with the format, though I know not of ku's too well, and I find this quite pretty...e
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 5/8/2012
Crystalline Ku's Felix. Lovely symphony of heart.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Laura Fall 5/8/2012
Words spoken so tenderly and dear what a beautifully written poem indeed Laura
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