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| Reviewed by A PAX |
1/8/2005 |
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actually this could apply to any gender(ok a few are absolutely male reactions lol) preference
I like it
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good rhyme and romance :) |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
1/6/2005 |
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| Very well done. |
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| Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader) |
1/4/2005 |
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| Beautiful, romantic and passionate poem that is so wonderfully written! |
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| Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader) |
1/4/2005 |
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| Sultry and deliberate! |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
1/4/2005 |
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| very good...i enjoyed this alot |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
1/4/2005 |
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This is beautifully wrought, Ryan Kelly. :) Your entwining of romantic age with a few whimsical images, like
"My face aglow with blush
I feel a curtsy, but instead rise and bow"
created an aura of sensual carnality that can be felt with stirrings and tinglings by a sentient reader.
This section is lovely, and relatable to my experiences, of late.
"His eyes so dark of brown
Holding all his mysteries"
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
who is not your aunt... :) |
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| Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader) |
1/4/2005 |
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| Who says that romantic poetry has gone out of style it is very much in style. |
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