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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/3/2009 |
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truly enjoye your written poetic thoughts
Love those candleligh scene
Love & peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
3/30/2009 |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
3/30/2009 |
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| Lovely writing sweet lady as always...stay safe and well...Hugss |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/29/2009 |
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| wonderfully warm & loving ... |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
3/29/2009 |
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Carole, how lovely! How quietly erotic this scene between a woman and a man and the unspoken, yet sensory touch of two closely entwined bodies and the music that, possibly, might be heard only by the two.
Makes my long for someone to hold closely.
Your friend, Mark |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/28/2009 |
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I'm a hopeless romantic and I absolutely love reading this poem.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/28/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing this offering of flowing romantic delight, Carole. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
3/27/2009 |
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Absolutely beautifully sensual! Well done, Carole!
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Bill Broome |
3/27/2009 |
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Your words paint the perfect picture of love in candlelight. Again, words do more to take your reeader to the ultimate night. Top notch writing. - Bill |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/27/2009 |
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Beautiful write, Carole; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/27/2009 |
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Carole,
A beautiful place to be, your words - thank you!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/27/2009 |
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as we disappear into love,
for our moment in time
Quite a lovely piece, Carole.
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/27/2009 |
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How sensual it can be? when the candles become discreet shallowing the flame so the lovers could enjoy, in the dark, the embrace after the passion subsided.
Georg
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/26/2009 |
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A very passionate sensuous romantic moment that entices the reader
to mimic the imagery...exquisite, Carole! |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
3/26/2009 |
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| Carole, this is as smooth and tender a candlelight dance into romance as I have ever shadowed -- I too, can close my eyes and, "breathe in the smell" of romance in candlelight, "love's perfect dance" -- the music, a serenade, a mood, a lover's etude -- you've done this thing with great style my dear friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/26/2009 |
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Carole,
Beautifully romantic, soft and tender...and perfect.
John |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/26/2009 |
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Well this certainly warmed my heart and made me feel all romantic and mushy inside...I can only imagine what it will do to your partner when he reads it by soft candlelight with your hand on his thigh...
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/26/2009 |
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So smoothly this flows, with such a glow of romantic peace...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
3/26/2009 |
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Carole, you're beautiful by candlelight.
What joy to share love's perfect dance.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
3/26/2009 |
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| Breathtaking....what can I say,, this is so romantic....and a keeper! |
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