|
| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/5/2009 |
|
| THE POETICAL ELEMENTS OF PHRASES AND IMAGERY COMBINE WELL...TO PRODUCE A WELL WRITTEN WORK THAT SUPPORTS YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Johanna Fields |
7/24/2009 |
|
| Carole, A great poem and good writting, Hugs Johanna |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Ray { Not a Poet } |
6/3/2009 |
|
Wonderful poem, I enjoyed it very much
Have a great day
Ray { Not a Poet } |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/1/2009 |
|
Your Beautiful poetry
has always been inspirational... Carole
You take the beauty within your heart and soul
and scribe it on the parchment before
For us to awe upon, as we review your wonderful work
Love & Peace be with you
William
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
5/14/2009 |
|
fantastic imagery, carole.
the palette of ideas herein really move!
well done, as always,
carolyn |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine |
5/14/2009 |
|
| Forceful conclusion. Liked very much. R |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/9/2009 |
|
| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/9/2009 |
|
| Most captivating imagery and poem, Carole. May the Winds of Change be good ones. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
5/9/2009 |
|
If your heart gets a kiss from that wind you will be in love with that shadow coming inside the mist to take you in his arms...
Georg
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/8/2009 |
|
Allowing the mind and spirit to explore freely can only lead to good things, nice writing...
Be always safe,
Karen |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/8/2009 |
|
The wind can indeed be a spirit that fires up the imagination. Well done, Carole. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
5/8/2009 |
|
Highly imaginative approach to changes observed
and assimilated in the course of a poet's day.
At least, Carole, that's how I read and feel and
enjoy this marvelous poem. -gene. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/8/2009 |
|
Splendid descriptive write bringing the images to life!
I felt like I was watching ghosts dancing,as you wrote, Carole! Kudo's!
love,
eileen |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/8/2009 |
|
| Carole, you created an atmosphere of mystery for me -- mirages created when the sun's intense heat, tarmac and thermals conspire to hand us illusions -- or were they truly specters roaming in search of answers never to be found -- this is an exercise in providing many possibilities for the reader to select from -- choosing the one that best fits their personal mood and beliefs -- well done my dear friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/8/2009 |
|
I envisioned emotions comming from a happy person when i read this poem. Great
Milton |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/8/2009 |
|
Carole,
Tremendous intensity and energy in this poem from first line to last, never letting up, driving on and on, "a haunting restlessness" is perfect for its summary.
John |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/8/2009 |
|
I love the way this takes us through the minutes of a day while our hearts and bodies compensate and try to deal with what is. Very nicely done and love the format.
hugs
fee
|
|
|
|
Share
Print
Save