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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/18/2009 |
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you speak volumes for we small, aspiring poets.
well done, indeed.
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/15/2009 |
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An exzcellent write Carole
Exactly as I am feeling these past few weeks
or months......... just didn't know how to scribe it on paper as you have done.....
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/15/2009 |
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Carole,
I love the way you turn a blank sheet into pure art.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/13/2009 |
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Been there...done that! giggle.....funny how that works! Nicely penned, Carole!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/12/2009 |
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| You too! Terrific poem here Carole. Thank you for sharing it with us. J'nia |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/12/2009 |
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| Superb poem of how it feels to come up empty! Fine work, Carole! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/12/2009 |
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i have given up forcing a poem, when it's ready to be born, it comes out ...
sometimes, you do have to push and breathe hard though ;) |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
10/11/2009 |
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I thought that I sent a review of your excellent poem yesterday, but guess not. In writing poetry, I never have much of a problem because I know what I want to say then it just becomes a case of putting the words in the right sequence, with the right meter and, of course substituting certain words for other certain words. In writing my three books or even short stories, I would and do very often lose the word/words that I want to write and try as hard as I might, they do not come until I get up to heat my coffee, or go out and get stuck in L.A. traffic, then, when I am not trying to find the word/words, it/they come to me. See, sometimes it pays to live in a large city with traffic problems.
Your friend, Mark |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/11/2009 |
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| I don't have that problem very often, but when I do come up repeatedly with a blank page it is the most frustrating thing in the world. I find myself reading. anything. I have read catchup bottles and something on it clicked and I was bake in business. Doesn't work all the time, but enough times that I still do it. |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
10/11/2009 |
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Nice poem Carole,even blank page imagination has its muse, to seek those thoughts that elude us is to be within the realms of creativity. An enjoyable read of thoughts through poetry...
nice... |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/11/2009 |
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| beautiful articulation of what can be the cause of much frustration, yet your elegant words here are philosophical and gracious. Deeply reflective, this makes me think of trying to catch shimmering soap bubbles on the wind... and to hang on to them! :)) You prove that even wordless voids are never such to the able writer. xx |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/11/2009 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!! I LIKE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/11/2009 |
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!...once upon a thought..." what a wonderful introduction to a intimate world of elusive images and a confused muse, a bittersweet one, like the first crocus peering out from the snow.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/10/2009 |
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We as writers, poets and dreamers must accept the flat spots of our creativity as much as we embrace the high swinging curves of inspiration that fly out past centrefield. Great capture Carole.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/10/2009 |
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Carole,
A fine exploration of the creative process, its challenges and indeed the frustrations, but within the entire 'happening' there is the core of creativity and that comes through beautifully.
John |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
10/10/2009 |
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| I can really relate to this poem and written so well. Love the imagery of the chase for words. Bravo. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
10/10/2009 |
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Carole, I can relate to this poem. I believe my muse went to Italy for a while. lol
Thank you for sharing this lovely poem.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/10/2009 |
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Wonderful write, Carole; well done, (((my friend)))! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Steve Chering |
10/10/2009 |
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you are a fantastic writer. I would love you to come join us in UK.
go to this link fledgling press.http://www.canyouwrite.com/canyouwrite/browse_stories_by_rating.asp
we need great writers like you to save our site. before it dies a death, steve |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/10/2009 |
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| I KEEP SAYING...EVEN WHEN POET FEELS 'NOTHING' AND SAYS IT...IT'S 'SOMETHING'. WELL WRITTEN. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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