|
| Reviewed by Paul Judges |
11/9/2009 |
|
| Delightful haiku, Carole |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Stephen Pollard |
11/3/2009 |
|
Carole :
Wonderful. Again you picked the picture that was just
right for the style you were writing in.
Stephen Pollard |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Art Sun |
11/1/2009 |
|
Carole, excellent wording of thouhgts...each one is special within its own display..
nice....
Art Sun... |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
10/28/2009 |
|
Carole, I'm always impressed by your haiku moments.
This one strikes home:
a winter type wind
lifts the cats fur
then moves on
-gene.
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
10/27/2009 |
|
| Wow! These little offerings and splendid in deed. I especially like the dream on your tongue and the exhaust fumes. Great images. J'nia |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
10/26/2009 |
|
| You are one of those poets that I can never feel distraction when I read your work, it commands my thoughts, my senses, my emotions. I am your fan. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/26/2009 |
|
Wonderful haiku!! You are so gifted...especially loved
waking up with someone elses
dream on your tongue
inhaling in anticipation
Skillfully done, and much appreciated your sharing with us!
Anna
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
10/25/2009 |
|
these are lovely, carole.
always a pleasure to savor your artistry.
carolyn |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
10/25/2009 |
|
as if loneliness perched on
telephone lines like a crow
autumns chill lingered
... this my favourite of this picturesque string, Carole; captures so much in so few syllables! :)) xx
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
10/25/2009 |
|
Wonderful, Carole...each one of these bear all of nature's treasures. More Random Thoughts bear well in the outside world where material wealth looks pretty poor compared to the simplicity of your haiku's...
Warmly,
Sage |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/25/2009 |
|
| EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
10/25/2009 |
|
You have created a pearls lace with every one of them ku's.
Georg
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
10/24/2009 |
|
thank you carole
outstanding kus each on its own
I miss that one season "Autumn"
And its beautiful kaleidoscope scenes....
Love & peace
William |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
10/24/2009 |
|
| these are wonderful...awesome creativity I enjoyed very much...and great fall photo to match |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
10/24/2009 |
|
| Carole these are so good,,you should make a book of them! |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/24/2009 |
|
| Carole, your haikus may be random, but the message of each imparts the finishing touches to your magnificent photograph -- "chill wind moaning, as a pile of colorful leaves, scattered like wishes" -- a story repeated throughout our lives, beautiful dreams scattered and dispersed by the harsh winds, the bite of reality -- my favorite -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
10/24/2009 |
|
I didn't know what a Haiku was and read "More Random Thought" as a poem and, though I didn't understand the signafince in the sequence of the verses, when I finished and realized what you had written, each verse, or, I assume, each Haiku took on a beauty of its own.
Mark
|
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/24/2009 |
|
Carole,
I like each and every one, the images are sharp and rich; if I had to choose one, it'd be the dark grey clouds "heavy with intention" - that one is highly vivid and evocative.
Fine work.
John |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
10/24/2009 |
|
You have effectively painted the changing of the season via your verses here, Carole. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
10/24/2009 |
|
| Pretty images. Enjoyed. |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
10/24/2009 |
|
| THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS VERY WELL DONE. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
10/24/2009 |
|
| Next to the last one is my fav-o-rite . . . |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
10/24/2009 |
|
The sounds, sights and feelings of autumn are all captured in these wonderful Ku's, well done Carole.
hugs
fee |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
10/24/2009 |
|
Wonderful imagery in this, Carole, and the piccy is stunning! Well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
|
|
|
|
| Reviewed by George Carroll |
10/24/2009 |
|
| Excellent Haiku's, each a gem in itself. |
|
|
|
Share
Print
Save