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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
8/15/2008 |
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The rhythm in this poem speaks as clearly as do the words.
The desire to comfort and be comforted is as universal as the certainty of physical death. We long to hear our loved ones after they depart this life and your poem does that. |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
5/22/2008 |
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| What a great outlook you have on life and the afterlife. Sounds as if you are truly a man of God. Take care and stay well. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
5/3/2008 |
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What a beautiful tribute to your father. Yes the Great Spirit will embrace him and he is learning all that we seek now here on Earth. Rise to Sister Moon and Father Sky, Mother Earth and Brother Wind, for they embrace his spirit and transcended his journey with loving energy.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" Moonstone |
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| Reviewed by Heather White |
7/31/2007 |
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| Loved this, brought tears to my eyes |
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| Reviewed by Gerald Tate |
4/23/2007 |
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Brilliant, with a capital B
Gerald J Tate |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/7/2007 |
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Thank you for sharing these soul stirring sentiments. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Monette Bebow-Reinhard (Reader) |
2/20/2007 |
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| This made me cry. I thought of my father. I wished his words were as true as your father's. These words are beautiful. They are the sky, the rain, the morning dew. They are you. |
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| Reviewed by SOULFUL SHEE G. Pulsing In Passionate Purple PassionS |
1/18/2007 |
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What a WArm Feeling here!
I liked this Alot!
Thank you for sharing your Soul Jake~
Never read you before- I will again...
Come to my corner of the den, when you can!
Have an Enjoyable New Year!
WArmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheee
(To read "My MOm's Husband" and "The Name DAD Should be Love"- would explain Warrior title for me)~ |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
2/18/2006 |
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| Thank you for this heart touching reminder. I have lost family to cancer too and it helps to know they are in a better place :-) Cheers! |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/18/2006 |
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Jake,
A shining tribute to your father. Very well penned...you honor him with your words. Bless you, my friend, and thank you.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Leslie Bond |
2/22/2005 |
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| Very excellent poetry about your father! Leslie |
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| Reviewed by m j hollingshead |
2/7/2005 |
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| i like this |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
1/17/2005 |
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outstanding job on this, jake! wonderful tribute to your daddy; his spirit will live on!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears < |
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| Reviewed by Linda Roman |
1/4/2005 |
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| beautiful |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
12/30/2004 |
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This is very beautifully crafted, and I love the mystical
sentiments that flow through this wonderful tribute to your father!
I'm sure he would be proud of what you have written! |
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