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Disturbing Ovid
by Paul Williams
Tuesday, July 04, 2006
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'Words should instruct and delight and transend the mundane. Poet and listener are raised beyond the mundane, every poem is incomplete until the reader and listener finish it off.'

Longinus; 1st century AD.


Disturbing Ovid

 

The dawn arrived in her soft saffron car,

reading the paper over breakfast

a silence fell to break the air’s

insistence on carrying clutter from afar.

 

Done with the drivel of the world,

the silence encouraged thought

to morph; so, to a universe where love

is cruel, men are destroyed by Gods

and treachery paid for in blood…

 

‘hang on? That’s…Oh! never mind…’

 

Sulphur smeared torches lit the way,

following heroic deeds and tragic loss of love,

the bathing of wounded hearts in tears.

 

The Serpents teeth had been sown

and armies of the dead fought and died again.

Lydian sailors cast into the spray

by the boy Bacchus, a man at play.

Fools challenging the Gods

turned into owls, bats and frogs

and love so cruel…Echo and Narcissus,

poor Pyramus, poor Thisbe.

And Atlas made to carry

the weight of the world upon mountainous shoulders

Medusa’s nemesis upon winged Pegasus

and the slaying of the Gorgon

all these tales and more did fill my morning

but the fresh beauty of silence

withered into the air…

 

destroyed by the incessant buzzing

of a Bluebottle lost in curtains of poor taste

from which it had now escaped.

 

Child of the serpent race, child of Mars

I know your tricks, you seek to destroy

this process of transcendence.

I’m the eye in this universe

Your guise is no disguise, your ploy

fails, upon the display cabinet

 

filled with decorative tat,

Lydian dolphins, marble elephants,

fresh garlands, tresses dripping with myrrh,

crystal glasses and all that.

 

I slake my thirst for vengeance

with a weapon that proffered hope

a rolled up copy of The Guardian’s

G2 supplement, I’d gone over the

edge and could no longer cope.

 

Swat!

my winged tormentor

fast though it was

fell lifeless into the bin…and silence returned

 

I have no use for the company of Nymphs.

 

 

Paul Williams©2006

 

 

 

 



 
 




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Reviewed by Helen Downey 7/21/2006
As Kate just stated..."TOTALLY BLOODY BRILLIANT... SHOULD BE PUBLISHED... HAVE YOU READ PAUL FARLEY?? NEXT GENERATION OF POETS, I THINK... DO IT!! She is right! THis is rather good you know. I loved the journey I just went on while reading this fantastic piece. It is going to be added to my favorite list along with your others.
Let me know if and when you get this one and the others published...I am anxious to hold the book in my hands. :) Helen
Reviewed by Kate Burnside 7/18/2006
TOTALLY BLOODY BRILLIANT... SHOULD BE PUBLISHED... HAVE YOU READ PAUL FARLEY?? NEXT GENERATION OF POETS, I THINK... DO IT!! He has an Arts background and is down-to-earth Liverpuddlian... think you'd relate. This is your natural voice, Paul - so unforced and yet totally intellectually stimulating and skilfully interweaving of literary and "mundane" detail. This is my absolute fav of yours and I am keeping - feel like I've just read a modern-day masterpiece here in the Brit-wit "tradition" (just to make your toes curl! :)) And we're on for a London bash... how does Tuesday 8th August sound to you?! Will text in a mo.... LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/14/2006
Thank you for sharing this mythological journey, Paul. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 7/11/2006

A unique composition with outstanding simbological imagery...
"Disturbing Ovid" flows, and its light glows enchanting the minds and nourishing souls.

I salute You, Poet.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor 7/10/2006
Paul, a wonderful trip through the classics.

Enjoyed.

Reviewed by * Aberjhani 7/8/2006
Ouch! How awesome was this fusion of classic allusion and modern temperament? Totally so.
Aberjhani
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/6/2006
It's true . . . I believe,

The mind captures so much, continually and perpetually for the extent of our lives, and it seems that only what is most annoying, or perverse, or bent on destroying the inerancy of ageless Truth, or most colorful, or loud, gets the nod and the recallable memory.

It takes much discipline to "see" beyond the flesh illusion" and the paint that modern life suggests we adorn ourselves with to be noticed.

One might wonder if the bluebottle, and its freakoid colors, is a type and shadow of a spiritual force bent on blinding us temporarily to the more subtle nuances around us.

Good write Paul!

Richard
Reviewed by jude forese 7/5/2006
very creative neo-mythological juant!
Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater 7/5/2006
I've never heard anything quite like it! Mythology like a sardine run in a result of poetic interplay! Wonderful control of what happens in this respective realm of Disturbing Ovid. Paul, Congratulations on your fine works in Poetry Life & Times this month.

Sage
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 7/5/2006
Most captvating write Chuckie!!

Hey you promised not to post this pic with me Kate ant those other girls you stud.....lol!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 7/5/2006
A most captivating poem, Paul, and that fabulous quote goes very well with this.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) 7/5/2006
Bluebottle. He's fallen in the water.(Goons)
Longinus, my girl say's that. Is he a friend of Bigus Dickus? Hail Brian...

Clever very clever using such mythological creatures in such an ekphrasic way....
Reviewed by Sherry Heim 7/4/2006
This is a wonderful romp through the rather unsettling world of Mythology, much of which, I think, reads like a fever dreeam. Imaginings and terrifying powers, I have not pulled those books from my shelf in many years. Very nice writing, Paul.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by L. Figgins 7/4/2006
Seems every time Man has transcended in conciousness, rejecting the gods who were created from hullicinaton by necessity of thought~~the powers that be resurrect them in an effort to maintain the status quo and control the masses. If my interpretation falls short of your meaning, Paul, I do beg your indulgence. Thinker's write, tempered with just the right amount of restraint...
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/4/2006
An elegant ,eloquent read with lots of fun too, (love the andy splat of the winged nymph;-)Lord of the Bluebottles! You do mythology so well paul! Encore! Encore!
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 7/4/2006
Ovid needed disturbing, my fellow man. After going through the perils and heroics and insanity of Greek mythology, you could have done nothing less than flattened the Bluebottle, who knew what, or who, he really was in realtime mythology.
Reviewed by Peter Paton 7/4/2006
Paul

I believe you delivered a blow against the Lord of Flies here...;)
And I always thought the bluebottles were the cops...;)

Peter
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