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| Reviewed by Denise Edwards |
5/3/2009 |
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| Beautiful |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/28/2009 |
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| what a nostalgic, 'real' write--love it! |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
4/23/2009 |
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"Life is round
curves off a straight line
Enter the race
The taste of paradise
still in your mouth
that no earthly thing
can fill"
These are brilliant lines. I love the references to all that is circular; it feels very karmic to me. The metaphysical flavor here is irresistible.
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
4/22/2009 |
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Nothing can replace our youth and uncertainty except for maturity and acceptance. and that's not allways fun, but it's life, and that's all we have now.
Enjoyed this, Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/20/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts.
Love and best wishes.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/18/2009 |
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Life is round
curves off a straight line...
Linda, kind of reminds me of a trip I took once, or perhaps
I'm still taking. Metaphorically speaking, wow! -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
4/17/2009 |
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The imagery and the metaphors in this were perfect, I like your style, I am off to read more of your poems
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
4/16/2009 |
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Linda,
The images are delivered so directly without any ornamentation and are so appropriate for journey as metaphor; the opening of the final stanza reminds me of Donne's 'at the round earth's imagined corners' and indeed the whole poem has much of the metaphysical in it.
John |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
4/16/2009 |
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this does great things with my mind, Linda. I love the forward-backwards play of images, plus the juxtaposed square with the round, lines with curves, white with red. Especially like the lines:
The taste of paradise
still in your mouth
that no earthly thing
can fill
... and great resolution in conclusion. Very strong writing and just the sort of metaphysical musing that takes place on these long-distance, mid-night country roads! Love it, thank you. Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
4/16/2009 |
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| Very well written sweet lady..enjoyed very much..stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/16/2009 |
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Sounds like you have been hitting the road lately and yes it can be and is a reminder of the journey of life and how we choose to travel it...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
4/16/2009 |
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Classic. Thought-Provocking
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Ron |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
4/16/2009 |
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Great images imprinted on screen for the entertainment and accpetance of those who so enjoy reading your work...well done.
hugs
fee |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/16/2009 |
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life passes us by ... we can see into our past but never regain it ...
powerfully vivid images ... |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/16/2009 |
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| Quite profound, and quite a picture, too. |
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