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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
9/21/2009 |
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It makes you wonder Lin where it will all end up.
For me I keep going with courage and fortitude and let the Higher Power dictate the cours eof my life
Take care
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/6/2009 |
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Very nicely done!
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/4/2009 |
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Beautiful words for a beautiful lady.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Pierre Ortega |
7/2/2009 |
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This is for all of us to ponder and all of us to react to and all of us to change.
Great write, Pierre |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
7/2/2009 |
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| You ask pertinent questions for our times, Lin. Very nicely done! |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/2/2009 |
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| AMERICA; MANY ERRORS, MANY FLAWS...BUT STILL...'THE BEST!' A GREAT ACROSTIC...DONE VERY WELL. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU. JOYCE |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/2/2009 |
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Thought provoking excellence, Lin, questions that must be addressed - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/2/2009 |
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| Powerful questions, and a most thought provoking poem for this Independence Day. |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/2/2009 |
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Very nicely done and a wonderful gift to your fellow Americans as you approach the 4th of July..
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/2/2009 |
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| a sobering write-well said |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
7/2/2009 |
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A nation that takes the luxury to disregard its war veterans will not hold a lighted match to even tickle the shadows.
Georg
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/1/2009 |
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Brava, Lin! Outstanding!You
give me hope with this gem!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by John Martin |
7/1/2009 |
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| The touch is being extinguished by those occupying our Capitol. They are claiming it is to save energy in order to stop global warming. I am afraid our grandchildren will ask one day.. "What is that statue in the harbor?" Someone will answer.."The Statue of Liberty." They will ask again, "What is Liberty?" " "I guess it was her name whoever she was." |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
7/1/2009 |
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Lin this is a wonderful poem of voice speaking as if Mother Liberty herself were expressing her feelings...
Peace & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/1/2009 |
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America slips and stumbles from time to time, Linda,
but continues to sing and shine in your moving hymn.
-gene. |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
7/1/2009 |
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So nervous now that all we've had in the past is being lost, and also thankful that I was part of America's last innocent generation. Too bad future generatins, along with today's present generation will never know America as we knew it.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
7/1/2009 |
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| I'm not a fortune teller but I don't need a crystal ball to see where we are headed. |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey |
7/1/2009 |
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L.G.
Very profound thoughts. But no matter what, through all our troubles and mistakes, we are still the greatest nation, the United States. (I liked the way you spelled out America.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
7/1/2009 |
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| Well we have sort of slipped off track in past couple of hundred years but the beacon is still working. The flow of your passages within the constraints of 7 letters is fantastic and profound. Very well done. Patrick |
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