by Jill Divine
Sunday, May 21, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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We are all in control of our lives, but sometimes it is hard when life is treating you like this. Please donít allow this suffocating energy into your life, as eventually your light will go out and youíll end up existing rather than surviving.
ACT positive BELIEVE positive CAST off negativity.
Take control of YOUR life, donít let the DARKNESS take over.
Donít want to do anything, donít care about life.
All around me is pain and my lifeís filled with strife.
Relax, I am told. Chill out for a while
Kaftans and candles, however, are not my style.
No longer do I exist, yet somehow I survive
Emptiness surrounds me. How can I thrive?
Slowly Iím dying. My light has gone out.
Since the darkness surrounded me; my time has run out.
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|VERY NICE GOOD WORD FLOW|
|Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle
|This is a deep and sad poem, Jill, but like Jerry, I could tell from your comments at the beginning that you know how precious both life and time are. Despite how difficult life becomes, don't ever give up!
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
|You comments before the poem tell me that your time has not run out.|