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|Reviewed by SARA QUEST
|Chills ran down me throughout this one, Sal. The measured meter and ephemeral glimpses, that is so often you, always do it for me. And of course your last lines, as always, are wonderful:
"And should I prove to be dreaming
by temporal mischance,
may I come to you when you're dreaming too…?
Of course. And we shall dance."
Thanks for sharing,
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|A most beautiful write, so passionate! Dance a wonderful dance from dream to dream to dream.....
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Very poetic and beautiful.
Blue skies and sunshine
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|I like this, thanx 4 the verbs mate!|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Nice Waltzing Matilda, catchyer for the last dance...|
|Reviewed by K. Mulroney
|Wonderful write!! A future and now meet, or do they? Oh, the possibilties!|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|I loved your use of the word "gloaming". It reminded me of the Glasgow Scotland song. Very beautiful|
|Reviewed by Gloria Gay
|Beautiful metaphors make this poem drift like a dream. Thank you for a few enjoyable moments while I read your poem.|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|enjoyed the imagery, ambiance and concept ...|