An Everglades Halloween
by MaryGrace Patterson
Friday, October 27, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A Halloween poem written in a Florida setting
Deep in the Everglades lives Hilda,
the witch. She casts wicked spells,
It makes her crazy, so they say.
She howls at the moon to keep people
A bubbling cauldrin sits on the
fire. Its thick gray smoke rises
higher and higher.
The smoke sends out a signal for
all to beware. Ghosts, ghouls and
goblins soon will be there.
Zombies and werewolves are invited
too. They'll dance around the fire,
drink " Swamp Water Brew".
Each year they gather to devise
new scares, for frightening people
is a hobby of theirs.
They'll boo and howl, yell and
scream, making frightful sounds
while practicing scarey scenes.
When Halloween night arrives,
and the moon shines on high,
Hilda hops on her broom stick,
and goes for a ride.
She flys across the ebony sky
leading fiends to towns and
cities near by.
A spooktacular show then begins,
as the monsters of BooVille do
frightful, scarey things.
At dawns first light , all say
goodnight. They fly back to
BooVille filled with delight.
Hallows Eve is over, gone till
next year, when once again
all will return to spread
gruesome everglades fear.
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|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THIS IS A VERY GOOD 'BOO TIME' WRITE...THE PHRASES AND IMAGERY FLOW BEAUTIFULLY TOGETHER...THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...MaryGace... I have been to the Eveglades many times,,, after this poem,, I will make sure it is always during the day :) Geat Job!
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
a strong exotic brew that makes all of us howl at the moon. Good one!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|O. I love it, MaryGrace; absolutely SPOOKtacular!! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
And a happy Boo Day to you too; I don't really celebrate Hallowe'en.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
WOW, this is a delightful romp through the swamps - well done!
You're missed - take care!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I think, from what I've seen of the Everglades, they in themselves would make me fearful, alligators, snakes & all kinds of creepy, crawlie things, not someplace I would go at any time of the year...Ed|
|Reviewed by d. krusky
|A great ride along with Hilda on her broomstick. You've done an excellent job in writing such a creative Hallowe'en poem. Well done!!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Wow never thought of the everglades, to me they are just a thing on tv..
|Reviewed by J M
|its halloween time again and you captured it.... I am not a fan of this holiday. But your gifted poetry is on target.|
|Reviewed by Gwendolyn Thomas Gath
"An Everglades Halloween"
A delightful read one I am sure the kiddies will enjoy!
Thank you for sharing you Halloween treat!
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A most timely seasonal write, MaryGrace. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A fine Halloween brew, MaryGrace.|