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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/21/2009 |
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I like how you develop the contrast in this poem. Excellent!
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/8/2008 |
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The French title grabbed my attention, Melissa. This is a fine and meaningful metaphorical write. I send you love and my very best wishes.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
3/27/2008 |
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| J'espere que tout ira bien (I hope everything will be just fine) |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
2/18/2008 |
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I know exactly what you mean, Melissa. Since Sunday, Feb. 10, 08, I have been exactly like this picture, as I had another v-tach, but my defibrillator stopped it from doing any damage. The number of times the defibrillator "kicked", scared me, and it was very painful. I am still recovering, so I know what the disjointed picture of life is, during a medical recovery. Get well sis.
You wrote this poem very well, and the imagery is very good. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), sister Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
1/16/2008 |
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| Excellent expression. |
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| Reviewed by Nicky Goodman |
1/14/2008 |
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| Very well put - Van Gogh days i find are pretty good, mostly... :o) really liked your expression here -super! Nicky xx |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
1/13/2008 |
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| You are a pretty good painter yourself, but don't discredit, Picasso, for a matisse, enjoy what you got now, and everything will fall into place, live the moment and your picasso will start looking good to you, ha, get better soon, Jasmin Horst |
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| Reviewed by Jean Pike |
1/13/2008 |
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| Fantastic poem, Missy. You have such a wonderful art for expression. I hope your sleep problems will go away soon. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/13/2008 |
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| Marvelous prose and I sure hope you are better soon. |
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
1/13/2008 |
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hmm, sounds like my start of the new year. lol. spring is springing just down the road i hope anyway,
randy |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
1/13/2008 |
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Sounds like you are having a rough time but it does not deter from your ability to express your thoughts so well in this write. Hope you feel better soon.
Hugs
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
1/13/2008 |
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| The scope of your despair of non-sleep and muddled morning thing come alive at your keyboard . . . Hopefully it will pass, this affliction . . . Still, it did not mar your writing ability, this was first rate . . . |
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