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|Reviewed by firstname.lastname@example.org Bennett
|This is so true my friend, Why go through hell here and end up there for eternity as it is hard life as you stated has it's ups and downs, smiles and its frowns but one day the righteous will gain the victory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Beautiful --wisdom's bountiful-- composition... "THIS LIFE" flows
from the fountain sublimity... Its contents and message enchant and
inspire the mind and soul.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|This life is a blessing
Complete with struggles and trials
You will always be guessing
And twisting lifeís dials.
It will never be perfect
No matter how hard you try
No, itís no good to object
At lifeís end we all die.
You just have to continue to try
Do the best that you can
Yes, the years they will fly
Be good to yourself, be your best fan.
Very positive and uplifting write....clap clap clap....love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|What more can anyone ask of you? :-) To stand firm in one's beliefs is a good thing as long as you keep your mind open to all possibilities and I think from what I have read here this is exactly what you have done :-)|