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| Reviewed by Tim Baker |
12/29/2008 |
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| Great write. I love the way that you weaved the ordinary pieces of life and love into this poem. |
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| Reviewed by Saundra Washington D.D. |
6/20/2005 |
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| Great! I enjoyed reading this one. |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
9/19/2004 |
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| wow! |
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| Reviewed by Donni-Jay De-Ville |
9/19/2004 |
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| FANTASTIC again! |
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| Reviewed by Jim Dunlap |
3/26/2004 |
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| Great ending to this. Poignant and compelling. |
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| Reviewed by Candida Eittreim |
7/12/2003 |
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Bitterly drawn. Good work!!
Candida |
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
6/25/2003 |
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Profound write.
:)Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
6/22/2003 |
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Hey,count yourself lucky!! You get a second chance at love & Life...K?
Vesna |
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| Reviewed by Calendula Petal |
6/17/2003 |
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too sad....fanstasy isnt all its cracked up to be.
perhaps she will be back for the rest of her sandwich....hope so. |
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| Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader) |
6/16/2003 |
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| enjoyed, expecting a change she acted strange. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
6/16/2003 |
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| sometimes it takes a trip to fantasy land to see things clearly... good write! |
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| Reviewed by E. Lucas-Taylor |
6/16/2003 |
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| Awww. Although listen up...she couldn't cook. You are better off. Good work. |
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