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| Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader) |
4/27/2009 |
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| Very powerful poem |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
3/16/2009 |
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This is a very sad and powerful poem.A well written piece
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/13/2009 |
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A most moving and meaningful write, Nicole. Thank you for sharing it and provoking thought and emotion. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
8/11/2007 |
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| Excellent expression. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Du'Gas |
8/7/2007 |
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Nicole, this is very painful and touched a part of me deep inside.
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| Reviewed by Jerry Engler |
5/15/2007 |
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| This is a terribly powerful poem showing not only the depth of the hurt but the talent of craft...Jerry |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
5/2/2007 |
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| Deeply touching and quite painful. |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
4/29/2007 |
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A meaningful and deeply touching write filled with such vivid mind pictures. You have much talent.
Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Theresa curnow |
4/24/2007 |
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| This really touched me. Its very emotional and deep and the words convey the message straight to the heart. |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
4/22/2007 |
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| this is a deeply emotional write on a subject that does not get near enough attention. Excellent work here. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/19/2007 |
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Oh Nikki this touches very deeply....hope all is okay sis!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by J M |
4/18/2007 |
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This touches deeply I cannot even comment the power I witnessed in this piece...........
Peace,
josie |
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| Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie |
4/17/2007 |
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This is so very heart-breaking, my heart goes out to you, outstandingly written and a very powerful warning.
Reindeer |
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| Reviewed by simply rita |
4/17/2007 |
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| Thank you Nikki, I'm sorry I'm just now reading your wonderful words of encouragement and I thank you for them. Thank you as well for catching my grammatical error. I pray you continue to enjoy my work. Keep writing and rhyming. Take care, simply rita |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
4/17/2007 |
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| Written only as an extremely loving mother could, Nikki, and we all can feel your pain. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
4/17/2007 |
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The pain I feel reading it, I pray you find peace within, words don't suffice how to express the heartbreak I feel for you.
Indeed it is wonderful to see you writing once more.. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/16/2007 |
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My heart breaks for this little child. Her suffering was uncalled for, listen, always listen to the little shining star. As a parent I thank you for sharing this.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/16/2007 |
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we must listen to our little stars before their light burns out ...
excellent poetry, Nicole ...
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
4/16/2007 |
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This has to be one of the most heart-wrenching writes I have read in a long while...
"A Mother's Lament" truly is disturbing to another mother...especially having my own teenagers!
At times I can feel their struggles with the new pressures of high school and friends who come and go...the images they conjure up out of misunderstandings...etc...It worries a parent everyday! We must never let a day go by without sharing our wisdom and concerns...staying on top of the problem before they even exists!
Thank you for sharing...I know this had to be very difficult for you to write!
My heart goes out to you and yours...Be Blessed~
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
4/16/2007 |
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Faith In Yourself (As Momma)To Overcome You As I Will Meet Overtake Destroy Your Human & Spirit Accusers!
Tears TRASK |
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
4/16/2007 |
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| Nikki, I won't forget your offer of friendship; your comment; your thoughts; your words. This is an incredibly powerful and moving write. --Jeff |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/16/2007 |
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Nicole my heart breaks to read of this sad condition. I pray help will be found that provides an answer for future recovery. I'm so happy to see you back! Have missed you, though this one hurts to read, you never lose your gift for writing!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
4/16/2007 |
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This is so incredibly sad and tugs at the very heart of me, Nicole. No mother should ever have to go through what you've written about. A timely message to all parents.
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
4/16/2007 |
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Emotions poemized, story delivered... "A Mother's Lament" is poetized, and the message is delivered.
Thank You for sharing "A Mother's Lament".
I salute You, Poet.
Gratefully,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Laura Mayer |
4/16/2007 |
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Oh, this is a heartbreaker Nicole!!
Hugs, Laura |
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| Reviewed by Todd-Michael St. Pierre |
4/16/2007 |
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| WOW... Poignant and gut-wrenching! Great write! |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
4/16/2007 |
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| Hopefully it is caught early and can be treated. |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
4/16/2007 |
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An eye-opener...candid and speakable truth...low self-esteem, especially in teen girls gives signals...a mother does hear, a womb cry many years after the child has been born...it's good to see you back posting, Nicole...
Sage |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
4/16/2007 |
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Powerful and heartshattering, Nikki; very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :( >tears! < |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/16/2007 |
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Nikki,
A powerful warning to parents to talk to their children, to LISTEN to them. A powerful warning to children to talk to their parents, to LISTEN to them. You may have saved lives today. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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