Fear of the Storm
by
G. Rynk
Thursday, February 02, 2006
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Thunder storms are cool.
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Thunder BOOMS.
I hear the sound.
Lightning FLASHES.
I see the sight.
The sky turns black within an instant,
A storm begins to form.
The wind blows hard.
I feel its power.
People run.
They try to hide.
They are afraid of the storm.
I do not move.
I stand very still.
I have no fear of the storm.
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| Reviewed by R Beeman |
2/1/2007 |
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If we always try to run from the storms of life, then we slowly die an inner death from the lacking of learning.
rb |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/2/2006 |
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On the other hand, there are those that fear the storm. I am one of them, a classic stormphobic. BUT: they also provide some of my greatest inspiration. Go figure!
Loved your poem, you convey the storm's energy succinctly. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen |
2/2/2006 |
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There is a swift-upping to your rhythmic verse, G., which promotes building passion, and acceptance.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen |
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| Reviewed by Divinity 11 |
2/2/2006 |
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awesome! i love a good storm! funny, people run from the storms within their minds as well
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