|Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen
|A great poem you have made a fan out of me after reading two of your poems, going to catch up on the rest now
In Christs Love
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|Plenty of thoughts in this poem. If only teenagers would remember their childhood stories and realise that Life is not a children's tale. Thanks for reading my poem.|
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|offbeat and on target for a vividly drawn vignette in verse... nicely drawn|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|a bit of positive enforcement here Paul -- a good uplifting each day is a critical prescription for our heath and well being - thanks for today's dose my dear friend -- I bid you joy, peace and love -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Loved being transported in your poem!
Thanks from such a good view!!
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|A wonderful tale of childhood fantasies, woven together with Christmas dreams. Loved it!
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Totally uplifting and cheerful poetry, Paul!|
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|This has both a wonderful child like view and Christmas as well. It makes you enter another world, the one you have portrayed here. Took me away.|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Delightful child like view. Makes me ponder how we perpetuate drama and catastrophe even in our youthful play.
|Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
|Paul, I enjoyed reading this. Reads very smoothly with a very good rhyme pattern. Helps get me in the Christmas mood! Thanks for posting and sharing.