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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
4/26/2012 |
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A great poem you have made a fan out of me after reading two of your poems, going to catch up on the rest now
In Christs Love
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
1/2/2012 |
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| Plenty of thoughts in this poem. If only teenagers would remember their childhood stories and realise that Life is not a children's tale. Thanks for reading my poem. |
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| Reviewed by Roger Wayne Eberle |
12/11/2011 |
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| offbeat and on target for a vividly drawn vignette in verse... nicely drawn |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
12/9/2011 |
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| a bit of positive enforcement here Paul -- a good uplifting each day is a critical prescription for our heath and well being - thanks for today's dose my dear friend -- I bid you joy, peace and love -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
12/8/2011 |
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Loved being transported in your poem!
*Paul*
Thanks from such a good view!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
12/7/2011 |
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A wonderful tale of childhood fantasies, woven together with Christmas dreams. Loved it!
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
12/7/2011 |
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| Totally uplifting and cheerful poetry, Paul! |
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| Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks |
12/7/2011 |
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| This has both a wonderful child like view and Christmas as well. It makes you enter another world, the one you have portrayed here. Took me away. |
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| Reviewed by Janna Hill |
12/7/2011 |
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Delightful child like view. Makes me ponder how we perpetuate drama and catastrophe even in our youthful play.
:) Janna |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
12/7/2011 |
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Paul, I enjoyed reading this. Reads very smoothly with a very good rhyme pattern. Helps get me in the Christmas mood! Thanks for posting and sharing.
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