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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/1/2008 |
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Well... I would like to agree with you... but... I think that children do lie... out of protection to their own psyches. And some children are scarred so deeply that lying becomes a habit that they don't even realize they are doing. Spend an hour studying RAD (Reactive Attachment Disorder) and you will find some understanding of what many children, especially those who have been adopted, go through each day. It is sad... and some of my children live it.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
4/13/2008 |
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| Dear Gloria, I fully agree with you. They are open and they don't need to be introduced, only some of them need help. Your poem is simple and to the point. Congratulations, Emile |
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| Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner |
9/25/2007 |
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| Very insightful poem. |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
9/20/2007 |
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| so very true |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/24/2007 |
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Spot on, sad to say: well done, Gloria!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/30/2005 |
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| Sadly so true, Gloria. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
6/13/2005 |
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wow
i agree.........and I don't
but i think E richardson makes a valid point.........very valid indeed..........
i work in a school............
and sometimes...........the little ones lie..........to survive......
its sad........
very wise poem
pax |
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| Reviewed by E. Richardson |
5/24/2005 |
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| mmm...since children tend to reflect the good and bad of adult around them, I think you hit the nail on the head here. Good work. |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
5/20/2005 |
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| children don't lie but they sure can bend the truth ... |
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| Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK |
5/17/2005 |
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Agreed Nordette,i.e My Son' Worlds Greatest Intellectual Liar Since Age 3
Just Like His Momma Lied To Her Adopted (Her) Momma!
Unique N Different Write!
TRASK |
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| Reviewed by C Hottran |
5/15/2005 |
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| yes, children are angels in a deceitful world!! |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
5/15/2005 |
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| I like how you put this poem together. It's well written; however, I think the best story that illustrates the flaw in its premise is Bill Cosby's story about his two-year-old sneaking a cookie from the cookie jar. When caught in the act and asked what are you doing, the child responded, "I was...I was getting this cookie for you." So, perhaps the poem would be more accurate as "Babies don't lie." ;-) |
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| Reviewed by Mary Quire |
5/15/2005 |
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Growing out of innocence is a very sad event. Too bad time can't just stand still.
M.Rose |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
5/14/2005 |
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| Sad. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
5/14/2005 |
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That's the truth -
Everyone was born innocent,
but some were invaded by the devils.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o) |
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