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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/8/2009 |
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| Loved it! I love the ocean;it has always been a source of great inspiration to me. Enjoyed the whispers you have penned here. |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
3/15/2009 |
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VEy well written Gloria. And yes I agree, the sea belongs to itself. I rate this a 10 out of 10, and thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/12/2008 |
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| Clear as an unspoiled sea. Moving! Thank you for sharing this, Gloria. For e v e r y t h i n g. xOx 'Pea' xOx |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
7/8/2008 |
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| Oh the sea, as a young child I loved to sit at the edge and let the waves wash over me, now I still love to do that. A big lady sitting at the edge of the sea, I feel it does belong to me and comes to greet me with the waves upon me. Love the ocean and sea gulls and all thus I named my gray cat Seashore. She is 11 years now and me all in all since death of Tom. |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
6/22/2008 |
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Very beautiful, and I love the idea of the sea whispering
"I belong to me".
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/12/2008 |
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| The sea is demanding. Placing the senses on full alert. For she will have her way with you. She belongs to no one. She entices with whispers and roars. Languish not in her soft underbelly of shifting sands. An excellent read for me Gloria. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier |
6/11/2008 |
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| The sea applauds you with rapturous waves...Great read Gloria |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/11/2008 |
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I can hear it, smell it, and I can see, Gloria, that
you and I are sea creatures who love the squish of sand
between our toes. Ah, and the cry of gulls. Drop by. - Gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/4/2008 |
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| An interesting thought and a lovely poem. I guess the words "I belong to me" is characteristic of all nature--at least that part that man has not destroyed. |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
5/13/2008 |
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| This makes me think of the vastness of oceans and staring out into forever and the power it brings, great! |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
5/9/2008 |
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Sweet words to sway with the rhythm of the tides on a warm summer night.......
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Eileen Granfors |
5/9/2008 |
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| This is a beautiful poem -- I feel the love of the sea, the sound of the sea in your word choice, and the complete mastery of self in the final stanzas. Very nice, Gloria. Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/9/2008 |
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As fellow lover of the ocean this poem stirs a lot in me, I have sailed the oceans both on diesel monsters and white sail boats and I am always amazed by it's changing character. Well writtten and just a lovely poem Gloria.
hugs
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/9/2008 |
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| Sweet, beautiful words!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
5/8/2008 |
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| "I belong to me"...haunting and beautiful lines. |
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