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Past Perfect
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Gloria Gay
Wednesday, October 22, 2003
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blue Christmas dawn
reflected on scratched ornaments
and snow drifts on the walk;
chipped paint porches,
tire swings,
buffalo nickels and melting cones
and apples purple wrapped.
we slid in and out of the seasons
banging the swinging door
that kept the dragonflies out.
we cared not that the cement burned
the sides of our skinny legs,
as we sat cross-legged
and played with jacks
or ran to kick the can.
our scalps damp and our throats
cooled
by glasses of lemonade,
the sun and the sky
and the air were ours,
as the breeze flapped our collars
and teased our hair.
do you remember those days?
those perfect days?
Gloria Caballero
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
6/22/2008 |
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The accuracy of your memories is impressive. I like the way you share them with your reader.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
5/1/2008 |
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I remember days like that...
Your poem brings back so many wonderful memories!
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Joe Fleckenstein |
8/6/2005 |
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Very nostalgic poem. I could remember my own childhood through your words and images. Good job how you created images that made me "feel" the various seasons again --like the warmth of summer, coldness of winter, etc. --Joe :-)
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2003 |
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are there really any in this world we share?
very well developed poem... |
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