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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/13/2007 |
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| very touching poetic expression Michael, I always say happiness is a choice, one hard to keep but once we make up our mind, this will be our main focus, focus pocus, pocus focus, hocus pocus |
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| Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader) |
3/12/2007 |
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| Dear Michael, Yes, you deserve to be happy; glad you today is a new beginning. love holly |
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| Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow |
3/12/2007 |
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New beginnings are there for us if we but reach for them..))
Myrna |
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| Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson |
3/12/2007 |
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thats right declare it see it accept it
ask and it will be given
enjoyed this!! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/12/2007 |
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| Wise and so beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/11/2007 |
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Superb Write Michael
Don't wait for "Tomorrow"
But what the next day brings
Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/11/2007 |
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Excellent putting the past behind just
buried everything it's time for a new beginning
It's time for you to let the sun warm
your heart and live again!!
I'm truly happy for you!!!!
Great message within this poem!!
Love And Peace To You...Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/11/2007 |
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Living in shadows no more
Complete happiness pervading my soul
A positive aura surrounds me
I am a survivor, I will survive
And that is a wonderful thing! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/11/2007 |
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A real positive offering!!
You soar in this one my friend!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/11/2007 |
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A caprichous absolution blowing in the wind, so we can scream from happiness and burn with passion, a survivor will survive to start every day everything all over again!
This poem gives hope.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/10/2007 |
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| new beginnings are always a time for celebration ... your happiness comes through this inspired poem, Michael ... |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/10/2007 |
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| No better way to shake the blues and start out anew. |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
3/10/2007 |
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This is inspirational and I'm so very proud of your progress my friend. From your beginning and the strain upon your heart then...goodness gracious you've come around.
Love,
Susan |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
3/10/2007 |
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Beautiful write my friend, for each new day we are given an opportunity to do what we will with our borrowed life. Your write is uplifting and inspiring, enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
3/10/2007 |
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Excellent poem, Michael! New beginnings are wonderful. A great introspective poem, my friend, and so full of hope.
Love and best wishes,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Susan Sonnen |
3/10/2007 |
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| Inspiring! I love the butterfly analogy! |
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