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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/15/2007 |
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When the fog lifts...it always turns out to be a bright sunshuny day!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bowling |
3/15/2007 |
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That's how life is,
Up, Down, and then
it starts all over
again...Sometimes we
all have those foggy
days...an exceptional
write my friend, enjoyed
as always enjoy your
work!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/15/2007 |
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"oh I know about fogy day in life
Some days you just want to stay in bed
Because the cloud of fog is to thick
Making it hard to focus on making life decisions
A very profound write with a very good message
Within this very interesting write
Love And Peace To You My Friend...Morning Star
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
3/15/2007 |
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| Loved the methaphor of this poem...our minds are like the fog, sometimes uncertainties cloud our thinking and makes it hard for pure concentration. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/15/2007 |
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| It would be nice if the fog would lift every now and then. We are expecting a very big snow storm tomorrow and I sure hope they are wrong with that forecast. |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
3/15/2007 |
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I enjoyed this metaphor, Michael. At times our lives really are like the fog. Well done, my friend!
Love,
CJ |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
3/15/2007 |
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| The fog lifts fairly fast outside when the sun comes out, but when its inside one's head---such as from a sleepless night--its slow to lift. Felt that way this morning, too. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
3/15/2007 |
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This poem make me remember like my own decision days sometime can get in a kind of sticky fog that you can pull totally away.
Great write.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/15/2007 |
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| May the Fog soon lift for all of us, Michael. |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/15/2007 |
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Michael,
But think how pretty it is, and how much more it will be when it lifts! Such a lovely little ode to the current conditions we're having. :) Like you looked out my window--! Enjoyed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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