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| Reviewed by Tigran Israelyan |
8/14/2006 |
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We are passing our starry way
We are never sad
Judy you are the one I choose
You are my life.
love Tigran Israelyan |
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| Reviewed by Linda Wells |
7/27/2006 |
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Judy,
I agree with Richard on this one. You truly do have a gift of putting word and picture together. I have looked at clouds all my life and don't recall ever seeing a heart in one. Maybe if you wish hard enough, anything can happen? |
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| Reviewed by bluecornflower orangetiger |
7/26/2006 |
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| lovely write , Judy. Mary |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/26/2006 |
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I see that heart in the picture, in the middle on the bottom, the powerline is going through it. Just glorious!
My wife sees hearts everywhere. I believe it is a gift. I enjoyed this construct because I could relate to it personally. You have a gift that reaches out and touches others Judy.
Kudos Poet ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg |
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| Reviewed by Jane Rodway |
7/26/2006 |
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| The photo is amazing and really makes the poem stand out even more-i like the way this one kept moving on the same beat, and i like the last line for the imagery, but each time i read through it, it drops oddly at the end of this because it is offbeat a bit to the rhythm of the poem- this poem is so perfect, that that is why it sticks out to me, but what do I know, lol! Excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
7/26/2006 |
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| You paint a wonderful song of found love. what are the odds that when those eyes met, that it was the beginning of a forever true love? Not too good I don't think. |
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