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Roses are Red
by Jennifer M Croy
Saturday, September 02, 2006
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poem of love and beauty



Roses are red, and beauty runs deep

My love for you will always keep

On the highest pedstal I won't let you fall

It won't build a wall between us, nothing at all

My love for you stand's, and I love holding your hand

Love's forever and ever grand

If we should part, I won't let it be, and I'll find a way to bring you back to me

Roses are red, and love is together, We will always find each other forever and ever

I say I do and you do too no love will keep us apart, unless we drift apart

And that will never do, because I love you and you do too

Our love will shine, like a shrine,  especially after we had toasted our first glass of wine

Two lovers in bliss, and never miss one last kiss

Roses are red, Beauty runs deep, our love will always keep


Even a taste of pure sweet love as I watch two doves soar above, will last a lifetime remained in love


Two lovers zoom to the sky, with bittersweet love in their eyes, and entwined forever, a love that will last forever


 

Roses are red
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Reviewed by Debbie Lacy 2/15/2012
There are many ways to decide what you feel and being that I love roses so much your poem was beautiful! Thanks for sharing it Jennifer! Blessings to you!


Debbie
Reviewed by Joseph Wraith 9/4/2006
Hi Jennifer,
Your rhyming is getting better but I am not feeling the romance of the poem.
It is relying to heavily on the rhyme and not the emotion.
So it gets static and unfeeling.
Try and work on the emotional feeling from your heart
and dont worry so much about the rhyme.
If it is there it will come to you.
It should flow from you naturally and not forced.
Try to stay with a simple concept instead of putting a
bunch of lines together that rhyme
It should also keep a beat like music.
Think of beat in your head and listen to your heart.
Then write to that beat.
If you loose the beat you loose the poem.
Same as being out of time when you sing a song.
Keep up the good work, you will get it, but it can't be forced.
Also be original in thought, try not to use clichés unless it is
representative of the character or moment.
Just my thoughts on this.
Can't wait to read the next one!
Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader) 9/3/2006
This is precious Jen..

Eternal Love, Dove
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 9/3/2006
Roses are red, and love is together, We will always find each other forever and ever

A very lovely ode to love, Jennifer. Quite a graphic, too.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/2/2006
You certainly leave no doubt as to your sentiments via your verses, Jennifer. I find the roses most symbolic. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,

Regis



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