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| Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann |
1/24/2009 |
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Liana .
The Lord never forgets his own
I'm glad to have read this poem .
Bless you .
Paul |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/24/2008 |
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Liana,
A very sad poem . . . so beautiful!
Take care,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
7/25/2008 |
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My dear Liana,
I am moved to deep emotion in sharing the sadness and sorrow and great misery your life on earth has thrown at you. By your poetry and by the words of your posted reviews, I have come to know that you are one who shines with glory when basking in beautiful and tender thoughts and expressions of the harmony of spirits of others.
It is in awesome admiration that I read of how mightily you have faced the hardships of a cruel and wicked world and kept your faith that there will be yet "The kingdom of love and repose."
Though you have suffered a wretched life overflowing with disappointments and jagged wounds, still you call upon your Creator to "Remember me, O Lord" and are ever grateful with a thankful heart for the blessing of your son whom you love "with all my heart."
With faith, I share with you my dear Liana that God has a special place for those who have suffered and kept their faith. And I tell you with confidence that the future of one who lives with God in their heart is to live in the heart of God.
I add my prayer to yours, Liana.
Love,
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Zach McClure |
7/22/2008 |
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Liana, I love the way you use such clear imagery and I just think this is a great poem! I've been going through some rough times lately - so this poem especially ministered to me.
with love in Christ, -zach |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
7/12/2008 |
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A GREAT Prayer Poem.
Amen!
John Michael |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/7/2008 |
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| Beautiful inspiration in this prayer that you have written as a poem. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/27/2008 |
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Love the passion and longing with which you write! Form and rhythm please, and you pluck at our heartstrings all too effectively.
Thank you for sharing this! 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Art Sun |
3/24/2008 |
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This is truly nice...a poem that gives one inspiration to live past the journey of life and find their true love within the Heavens...I liked this poem...
very nice Liana... |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
3/20/2008 |
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Liana thank you so much for visiting me and giving me the chanse to read your work. A beautiful prayer you share with us today. Thyank you.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem * |
3/8/2008 |
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| nice faithful verse |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/1/2008 |
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You truly did an excellent job
Translating this beautiful prayer
I certainly never thought of
heavenly kingdom, as
Darkness and death
But I guess for the love ones left on earth it would be!
Beautiful,I think its sad and painful!
Yet I found it to be inspirational!!
Outstanding write!!
Peace love and hugsss....Morning star
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
2/24/2008 |
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| You will surely be held with in God's tender loving arms. Much pain is emitted from your work. It touches my soul. I wish there was something I could do to help you... I will pray extra hard for you to find peace and happiness. Please read my poem,, Walking Hand In Hand. Its helped many.....God BLESS...M |
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| Reviewed by Kathy Armijo |
2/23/2008 |
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You have written a beautiful, heartfelt prayer. I am reading this before I go to bed. It has warmed my heart in ways that you cannot begin to imagine. It speaks to faith and belief in God. I am glad that I found you.
God bless you. Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle |
2/23/2008 |
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I've never considered Heaven to be a dark and lonely place, but maybe in the sense of sadness about being away from our earthen loved ones, it is.
Aside from that line, I love the poem.
Thanks,
Jill |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/22/2008 |
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I am a soldier on the battlefield of love
Exhausted and all bloodied by the fight
Yet always living through the hell of battle
And craving for one more.
Sadly, that seems to be the way of love more often than not. A prayerful offering, Liana; thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Cryssa C |
2/22/2008 |
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I agree with Andre... I didn't understand the third line of the first stanza. I hope for a heaven filled with light and living. :~)
This poem speaks of those who search their whole lives for a love that never quite materializes...yet the Lord will fill their hearts with love in that perfect day.
Cryssa |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/19/2008 |
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And He will remember you because forget is only a word that humans fount to use as an excuse...
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/18/2008 |
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Very spiritual and truth searching write....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
2/18/2008 |
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| What a beautiful poem...He sure will remember!!! |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/18/2008 |
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A heartfelt and outstanding write
so well penned
love & peace be with you always
William |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
2/18/2008 |
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| Liana, a broken soldier, exhausted and bloodied by the fight, yet always living through the hell of battle and craving one more (this is oh so true in so many people's lives) I loved the metaphor in this poem and the beautiful inspirational aspect of it. The images were magnificent and it flowed with grace and dignity. An excellent write! |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
2/18/2008 |
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...in sadness of ink...all the remembrance of earth...is asked of One in the heavens...with hope...there to be found.
this is beautiful poetry Liana...
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/18/2008 |
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| such a sad write--well penned |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
2/18/2008 |
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This poem would reach its star without the third line of the first stanza.
Outstanding composition... "REMEMBER ME, O LORD" makes the reader's heart boil its emotions. I had to dry my tears to follow my second reading. This poem is a poetic bouquet.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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| Reviewed by J Daniels |
2/18/2008 |
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| I think this is something all of us would want to take to heaven! |
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