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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
11/21/2009 |
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This is such an excellent write! I really enjoyed reading it Liana, thank you for sharing and caring. Be encouraged!
Much Love,
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/12/2009 |
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Life is like a puzzle we have to put the pieces together in order to make sense out of it.Excellent write.
hugs
Milton |
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| Reviewed by randy smith |
3/19/2009 |
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| The wind! my how it blows, and from what direction? sometimes the wind of change blows into our lives and then rushes away leaving us in a dead calm. great poem rcs |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
2/21/2009 |
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| You capture the wind so perfectly Liana ~ beautiful and touching. Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
1/20/2009 |
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Yes...Janus faced and wonderful! You write with such power, and such uniqueness...!!
Love, Diana |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
11/14/2008 |
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And yes, like you "The Wind" has come and played with me since childhood. I miss her when she is absent; I am fascinated by her destructive tantrums as well as her zephyr-laden days. Like your poem: "who could live without The Wind?" Your poem tells us in such heart-rendering verse, almost all Her secrets.
Fair winds to YOU! michael |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
10/19/2008 |
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| Wild is the wind, Liana, and you have captured its restlessness in this beautiful wind chime of a poem. |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/17/2008 |
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Liana,
You write with such beauty, and your imagery and words are always exceptionally crafted and delivered to the reader!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Joanna Leone |
7/10/2008 |
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| This poem is beautiful. My heart skipped a beat as I read the words, "But I'm partial to the wind, it reminds me of me, my soul..." This is beautifully written. This is truly a well organized poem, with deep meaning. If you have time, please stop by my authors den. I am new to this site and have written a few short stories and a couple of poems. I would love to know what you think. |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
7/10/2008 |
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I am taken aback by the sense of loneliness and isolation from all of humankind that is inherent in "The Wind." It speaks to me like a fragile soul desperate for love and companionship but relegated to a singular life.
Though there is a slight loss of syntax continuity in moving from Russian to English, the core of Liana's message is not diluted.
Only a sensitive soul pens such revelation of unrequited wanting, pressing for a loyal page and companion but settling for The Wind.
Sad but lovely. Makes me want to hold Liana and take her hurt away.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) |
7/8/2008 |
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| beautifully crafted and composed |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
7/3/2008 |
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"But I’m partial to Wind, it reminds me of me, of my soul"
This is the beautiful line that reveals the heart of the poem/poet.
(The use of "it" for both the ocean and the wind in the second stanza
is a little misleading, in my opinion.)
This is one of your best Liana.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by David Delaney |
6/16/2008 |
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The wind is alive & talks, wonderful writing Liana.
Dave. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/15/2008 |
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I love your personification of the wind, Liana. Very nicely done indeed. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/11/2008 |
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| Your presented to me some new images of the wind. One can't see it, but they can sure feel it. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
6/7/2008 |
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| Brilliant, Liana. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/6/2008 |
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Brilliant writing Liana
I love your work
Love & Peace
William
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/6/2008 |
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| Absolutely stunning poem you penned. So glad I chanced upon it. Beautifully written with vivid images that blow me away! Well Done! Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
6/5/2008 |
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This is beautifully written, Thank you for sharing with us Liana.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
6/4/2008 |
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This is... "THE WIND"... It is the Poem!
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/3/2008 |
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| I will paint the pages of your life with diversity. For I stir all, on land, sea and in the air. I blow the secret of life around and around. God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/3/2008 |
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| So hauntingly beautiful this is...the second stanza is exquisite. |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
6/2/2008 |
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...with so much beauty...you write of wind...and I travel in your words...for wind is everything...that carries me through life.
most excellent poetry of richness Liana...
John |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/2/2008 |
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Wonderfully moving and engaging piece that reaches out and touches the soul....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/2/2008 |
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| love this--especially the 4th stanza |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/2/2008 |
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| Powerful , filled with emotion and depth. It touches the soul with its haunting beauty ! The wind can be so many things to a person . You have captured it all in this magnaficent poem!....M |
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| Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis |
6/2/2008 |
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| This is a really beautiful piece. I have always loved the wind - especially the warm winds of summer that flirt with the flowers and lighten the butterflies' efforts. The wind is that mysterious, unseen breath that reminds us we're alive! |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/2/2008 |
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...that tears shouldn't be there, ever, and to make it to happen I will be not your only companion and page but your jester that by the command of your sadness will tell you stories as I mime to tickle your sorrow away with the wind of your laugh.
An if I should be the wind for a momen, I will blow that candle light so dreams can come when you close your eyes...and sleep.
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
6/2/2008 |
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| This is exquisite Liana!!! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/2/2008 |
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| Liana, I loved your metaphors in this great write. The images brought magnificent imaginations to my mind as I could feel the calling of the wind upon my face. This is an exceptional write. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/2/2008 |
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| I woke up this morning and saw in the paper a song called The Color of Wind and thought I might write a poem about it. Then I read your wonderful take on the ever blowing wind and wondered how close in similarity the one I was to write with yours but in reality not similar at all. Your poem is a masterpiece. |
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