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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
11/14/2009 |
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Powerfully written! I wanted to read more very interesting Liana!
May the Lord always bless and prosper you! I will be back to read more, for each time I visit what golden nuggets! Be encouraged Liana.
Much Love!
Always! |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
1/18/2009 |
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Enchanting!
God Bless you!
Talent you have in abundance!
God Blessed you.com
Amen!
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
1/17/2009 |
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Three times I read your "Portrait," and each time I felt more and more compassion for this dear heart that had tasted Spanish passion and, once lost, could not move on. And in each reading I knew with more and more certainty that she lives even now ten thousand fold in the hearts of forsaken women around the globe.
For all we have in life is Love. Once gone, how does one live except by
"Waking up in the morning and finding
Only loneliness in my embrace."
A deeply moving piece, my dear Liana, reflective of great pain and sadness.
Would you consider accepting my offer to walk barefoot and hand-in-hand along my California sea shore to feel the foaming water tinkling between your toes? I'll bring a bottle of fine wine to share as we place sweet memories on the shelf for another time. I think you have suffered enough.
With love, admiration and a quiet tear or two,
Richard
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| Reviewed by Melissa Mendelson |
11/7/2008 |
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A picture is eternal, and forever will we be reminded of the ones we loved and lost. And with that soft smile on their lips, the love in their eyes, maybe they loved us as much as we loved them.
Great poem. :) |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/15/2008 |
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Liana,
Deeply crafted, stunning . . . well-done!
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
7/3/2008 |
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| Wao! very melancholic and utterly heartfelt...those spanish eyes... |
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| Reviewed by Susie McCray |
6/25/2008 |
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| Very nice poem. It's hard loving someone that doesn't love you back, at least not enough to be with you. |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
6/21/2008 |
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| Powerful poetry friend I truly love it! |
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| Reviewed by Richard Hiebner |
6/17/2008 |
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The Ying Yang of poetic emotion
I love it
Richard |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
6/17/2008 |
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| Liana this is such a bittersweet poem. Beautifully penned and heart touching. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
6/17/2008 |
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This is outstanding... "PORTRAIT" depicts the essences of emotions. It is a poetic Flower scented with love.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Harold Nash |
6/16/2008 |
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Very very sincere.
Harold M. Nash |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
6/15/2008 |
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| This is beautiful. The desperation in the word choice reminds me a bit of one of my favorite poets, Anna Ahkmatova (misspelled, I am sure, lol). Excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/15/2008 |
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How I wish I could turn back the time
Just to put my arms ‘round your shoulders
And to see my reflection again
In the stare of beloved Spanish eyes!
Ah yes... ...if only wishes could come true. A beautiful and expressive write, Liana. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
6/14/2008 |
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How I wish I could turn back the time
Just to put my arms ‘round your shoulders
And to see my reflection again
In the stare of beloved Spanish eyes! |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
6/13/2008 |
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Liana this is so beautiful
I Love the way you post the question
And the strong sentiments,yet painful tone longing
to turn back the time!!
I love the visuals I love the poem!!!
Brilliant Piece!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
6/12/2008 |
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| Sad, passionate, beautiful and romantic. |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
6/12/2008 |
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A beautiful Romantic write Liana
Longing passion at its best
Thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
William
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
6/11/2008 |
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| The sting of unrequited love endures in the eyes of a photograph.How poignant. God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Smith |
6/11/2008 |
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| When we dream of a lost love, years of dreaming and longing can eventually turn into "no" feelings at all. You've described this in true form. A very nice write. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
6/11/2008 |
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| Heart felt .. Lovely images . The poem is filled with the anguish of lost love . It has a haunting quality about it... Well done...M |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
6/11/2008 |
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Liana,
This Is A Heart Yearning Write Of Passions Love Of Memories Faded Into An Undisturbed Rest. I embrace the beauty of this unforgotten love within the tender mercies of your longing words.
Love lives even in our memories...beautful write poetess
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
6/11/2008 |
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| Bittersweet love leaves such poignant memories and heartfelt pain. Nicely written. |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
6/11/2008 |
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| Spanish eyes of haunting poetry into a beautiful memory reflection, a very nice piece. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
6/11/2008 |
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| a lovely, remembering write |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
6/11/2008 |
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| Enjoyed the poem, pictures can speak louder than words and your Spanish friend sparked so many memories with one look at his picture. |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
6/11/2008 |
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Those spanish eyes lost the fire that they had for you and now are just ashes of something that could had be but never was.
The sadness of not having warm arms around our shoulders giving a loving hug and "that" whisper in our ear...
Georg |
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| Reviewed by Vesna TwinFlameunion |
6/11/2008 |
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Liana..open your heart to a new expression of the love in your soul..allow another to bless you with his love..the love of YOUR Twin Soul can and does effuse from every dimension..accept one ray of it and just be happy ..loving, here,NOW. Let go of the past..live in the moment.
Blessings dear One,
Vesna :) |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
6/10/2008 |
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Your wholesome spirit captures the moment well and with such strong sentiments, well said....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace |
6/10/2008 |
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| Very beautiful writing..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugs |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
6/10/2008 |
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Ah, unrequited love, such a passionate yearning with sweet surrender almost! Very lovely and I enjoyed this very much.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
6/10/2008 |
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There is such sadness in this story of unrequited love and yet, the sorrow also seems to be a sweet refuge from the rest of the world.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
6/10/2008 |
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| He was so in your mind and when you saw the portrait you could not help but think of the good times with him, but he was led astray to another. Sorry it did not work out with your Spanish Gentlemen. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
6/10/2008 |
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| Beautiful longing portrayed in this wistful poem of love unrequited. |
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