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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/5/2009 |
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Beautiful and heartfelt Liana! Excellent write, and very much enjoyed too!! Thanks for sharing and caring Liana!
Love And Prayers
Always!!
Inspire |
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| Reviewed by Michael Jones |
4/1/2009 |
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| This poem apex is the full circle of life, beauty briefly exalted so speedily deminished but its petals of love remains in our hearts. Liana because of you we have hope for a brighter tomorrow! Thank you. Peace!!! |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
1/20/2009 |
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| Dear Liana, Thank you for visiting my Den and particularly by a writer who translated Dostoyevsky, whom I had the privilege to read in French. Congratulations for your work. I believe, reading your nice poem Flowers, that we have a common interest. Keep writing, it is a marvellous action in life and helps us better understand life on earth. All the best, Emile |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
11/26/2008 |
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...how beautiful these words touch the heart...even flower petals fallen...will listen for your poetry...in whispers of the wind...and remember.
excellent Liana...
John |
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| Reviewed by Douglas Bentley |
11/15/2008 |
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Flowers know when Spring is here
And summer is near
When to bloom
Not too soon
Enjoyed reading.
Doug |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
11/10/2008 |
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an insightful, touching tribute to the "end of summer", the short beauty of flowers and the brevity of human love. And, a lot more nuance of color brushed into your fine lines of poetry
It goes so well in autumn.
Best to you, michael |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
11/6/2008 |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
10/30/2008 |
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| Beautiful and heart touching Liana, thank you so much for sharing. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
10/23/2008 |
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This poem has subtle meanings. Thank you for sharing this!!!
Sandie Angel :o) |
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| Reviewed by Joel Andre |
10/22/2008 |
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| Deep and passionate, so full of thought, and the emotions ring true. You are a gifted gal, thank you for touching our hearts. |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
10/20/2008 |
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| Lovely! The beauty of the flowers given life and personality through your words. Enjoyable to read, thank you! Best, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Debra Baker |
10/17/2008 |
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Liana, a beautiful reflection noted in this piece of poetry. Soar with that pen of yours and create more so as we may admire. Excellent write this poem.
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
10/14/2008 |
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Hello Liana,
I am so fortunate to have come to your site and read this stunning poem - thank you for this write!
Best wishes,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/13/2008 |
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A mystical gem that shows your muse inspired by Spirit.
Superb poem...
ET |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
10/12/2008 |
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Stunning without the beauty of a flower
poetry of romance would not exist since
a flower breaths life and speaks love and happiness
to all of us!!
Beautiful Write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning Star |
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| Reviewed by Southern Comfort |
10/12/2008 |
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| Truly beautifully worded and expressed. A joy to read! SC |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
10/12/2008 |
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Very beautiful. The flowers spoke of the brevity of life, i.e. we ain't here forever in this garden of earthly delights.
best wishes! |
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| Reviewed by Judith Pleasant |
10/1/2008 |
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Thanks for the reviews Liana. I appreciate your kind words.
WOW! I have never thought of flowers quite that way, but it is an awesome expression of your views and talent. Very interesting read.
Blessings,
Judith |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
9/10/2008 |
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| Liana this is truly impressive work, rich in vivid detail and emotion. A joy to read Dear Lady. |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
9/7/2008 |
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We see the petals drift to earth. We feel their thinness and the delicacy of their veins. Their end is tragic, yes. But there is another side to the coin. Death returns every part of the flower to the soil from which it sprang, and in gratitude, the soil gifts us
with another. Thank you for reminding me to stay conscious of the
swiftness with which the gifts slip away and the preciousness of
each and every one. With love and admiration, 'Pea' |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/7/2008 |
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The breeze now beckons, carrying the petals
Away. And traveler grabs them
In honor of the love long dead,
And mourns the fate which nailed her
To the eternal cross of solitude.
I find that your verses reach deep into my soul and echo there, Liana. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
9/3/2008 |
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The tragic ending is very striking.
The almost cliched beauty of flowers praised
contrasts with the complexity and irony of the
feelings you displayed. Interesting work as always.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by David Delaney |
9/2/2008 |
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Beautiful Liana, I do so love reading your poems, well done.
Dave. |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
9/2/2008 |
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| Liana, I always look forward to reading your work. You write with such beauty, even when writing about sadness. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
9/1/2008 |
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| Beautiful as the flowers your write about. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
9/1/2008 |
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Very beautiful and wonderfully written. Thank you for filling my morning with lovely thoughts.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
8/31/2008 |
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An outstandinf and beautiful write liana
It was a pleasure to have read your wonderful posting
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
8/31/2008 |
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| -- a beautiful, sad story of love unrequited -- a very masterful write which I enjoyed -- may the honey of love drip eternally upon your lips -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
8/31/2008 |
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The sublime scent is felt in all petals (words) of "FLOWERS", and its closing lines:
"And mourns the fate which nailed her
To the eternal cross of solitude."
..................................... are poetic ORCHIDS.
I have enjoyed the reading of a masterpiece.
I solute You, Poet.
In respect,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
8/31/2008 |
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| a beautiful and soulful offering-enjoyed! |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
8/31/2008 |
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Life often shares the gift of exuberance and zest, ever more so in the glow of blooming love. And is there anything more bitter to the soul than unrequited love in the face of fading radiance and the prospect of "the eternal cross of solitude"?
I stroll in the glory of my beautiful rose garden sniffing the fragrance of its air, faithful that my soul will be refreshed in the knowledge that God walks there too. But comes the Winter season, and my salvation lies only in the hope of an invigorating Spring. Wihout the hope and faith of life renewed, I too would suffer a heart in pain with a bleeding that "soon won't stop."
From my perspective, my dear Liana, you have shared with us a profound, insightful and lyrical commentary on the challenges of a life that is fleeting at best.
And now, quickly, I must go fill my heart with joy from the flowers in my garden while their bloom is bright and their treasure overflowing.
So mote it be.
Richard |
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