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  Fog
by Liana Margiva
Sunday, December 14, 2008
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Poetry by Liana Margiva


The fog descended upon Earth

Soaked up compassion for the poor heart

And with compassion he did take in passion

Wild passion that had promise of the bliss


And radiated joy. It called itself the Love.

Bewitched the poor heart, seduced with paradise.

And in the end it fought the futile fight

With musty apathy 


And soon, the battle lost, it caved in to defeat

And drowned the heart in ocean of despair.

The fog descended upon Earth,

It kept the loyalty to heart

Just for one sigh of bliss that it provoked.


And grateful, it deprived the heart of cheerless love.

The wind embraced the trees and branches broke

In tribute to departed love,

The gentle leaves all shook in fright and feared for life.


In fog’s tight embrace the Love did contemplate:

Was I so foolish to depart from heart I settled in for good?

The fog ascended high with Love in arms

And stars in heaven moved aside in awe.

Love recognized them as its kin and, behold,

It shone as fiercely as the brightest star.


Abandoned on the Earth, the Love

In heaven did become a shining star

That shines upon all lovers in this World

Who seek its warmth and light eternally.


Deprived of Love, the heart resented life,

It cried the bitter tears for its loss:

Where have you gone, my Love,

The one that dwelt inside for so long,

The one that shadowed the Sun and opened path to Moon,

The one that poisoned me by sweet and throbbing pain?


You preached eternity, and yet you slipped away,

Unable to forgive a harmless little sham!

Red leaves of fall, who’s crimson shroud

Is envied by the green leaves of the Spring,

Ask mighty wind why blows it off the candle of our love, 

And where it takes our dreams. 

So screamed the heart in misery and pain.




By Liana Margiva


Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov





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Reviewed by Joyce Bell 1/23/2010
I IMAGINE THAT THERE ARE FOGS IN OUR LIVES WHICH SOME HEARTS, WILL NOT ALLOW TO 'LIFT'...THUS...NO 'LIGHT' CAN ENTER IN. GREAT IMAGERY...DONE WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Inspire Hope 10/14/2009
Liana very powerful and moving words!Deeply profound
such an enjoyable read! Thanks for sharing and caring!


Much Love
Always!!!
Reviewed by Shay White 7/3/2009
What wonderful imagery to this poem, enjoyed it, thanks for sharing.
Reviewed by Ken Chartrand 2/6/2009
Hello Liana,I read your poem,"Fog". I found that the imagery and metaphorical rythem was quite beautiful. Well done. Please feel free to visit my site here in the"Den"
Reviewed by Paul Mc Cann 1/24/2009

Liana

How beautiful but cruel ,
and yet so true ,
In the end we leave behind our love
and those who have left us in the fog of life .

Paul
Reviewed by Diana Wiles 1/20/2009
Simply stunning and beautiful work...

Love, Diana
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 1/11/2009
Touches the depths of the soul, and the heart. Moving piece Liana! Beautiful write! Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson 1/10/2009
A soulful poem which deeply touches one heart. Well done!......M
Reviewed by Richard Orey 1/4/2009
"...So screamed the heart in misery and pain."

Another stark reminder how well it is to begin each day with a moment of reflection and gratitude for that which we have been privileged to know and to enjoy and for the blessings of love that we share in our memory and in our present.

"Fog" -- Another brilliant and deeply moving poem.

Richard

Reviewed by Theresa Koch 12/31/2008
WOW powerfully done
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/23/2008
Your verses reach deeply in my soul, Liana. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,



Regis
Reviewed by Debra Baker 12/22/2008
Liana, so glad I dropped in to read this one. I'm waiting for the book...this piece should not end here. It is too lovely. Soar with that pen another chapter.
Reviewed by Barbara Terry 12/20/2008
This is a very heartfelt write, Liana. It tells of the folly of love, as well as the treacherous waters love tries to breach. Thank you so much for this image rich poetic piece.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister, Barbie
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 12/19/2008
Writen with so much passion...this is just beautiful!
Reviewed by Elizabeth Price 12/16/2008
Passionate and powerful. Liz
Reviewed by E T Waldron 12/15/2008
This is a feast for the senses,so powerful and such passion,an
exceptional poem!

Eileen
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 12/15/2008
Awesome poetry
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 12/15/2008
EXQUISITE poetry.....just simply beautiul.
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 12/15/2008
"Fog" reflects the deep feelings of lost love and the lonely tremors that vibrate in a saddened heart. Well done...
Reviewed by jude forese 12/14/2008
well written translation ...
Reviewed by Axilea MU 12/14/2008
Passion and loss are everywhere
but there is also the sweet sadness of an energy that can be transformed into something else, like a poem...

I especially like the strength and complex flow of the last stanza.

Axilea
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain 12/14/2008
Liana~!

An exquisite write - beautiful!!


LOve & Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by William Bonilla 12/14/2008
Your poetry are beautifully composed
I truly enjoy each one as I
have the pleasure to read them
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Jon Willey 12/14/2008
Liana, you have written this poem magnificently -- it is filled with rich emotions -- peace to you my friend -- JMW
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 12/14/2008
Liana, You do write beautifully. -gene.
Reviewed by George Carroll 12/14/2008
No wonder you are a star in Russia. Loved it.
Reviewed by John Leko 12/14/2008
...you have written most beautiful poetry here Liana...and to know that love eternal would be a star in heaven...gives one hope that we yet might find love...when it is lost.
John
Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU 12/14/2008

I have enjoyed the reading of this beautiful poem. "Fog" sings nostalgic romance and stimulates the heart to pump grace and love.

I salute You, Poet.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Reviewed by Bonnie May 12/14/2008
So Sad but very beautiful write on the ending of a relationship. Well done Liana it was truly enchanting. Love, Bonnie
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