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| Reviewed by mary metcalf |
10/29/2009 |
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liana, your poem is so deep and with so much feeling. i feel the pain, i feel the sorrow, my tears fall at the acts of brutality of men to mankind, it is one i find so hard to ignore. your words do not go unheeded. your words do reach out and are acknowledged.
love and hugs
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
6/21/2009 |
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| Very poignant and timely, Liana!God does not often interfere in the lives of men, because of 'free will,' but he does answer prayer. |
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| Reviewed by Tommy Thomas |
5/14/2009 |
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Liana, you've captured the agony of the holocaust in verse and my heart goes out to everyone who has lost. I feel a sense of loss over the pleas for help and there was none. I share your compassion of those who prayed for God's help and he seemed not to hear, or rather not respond. I too, have shared a lifetime of pain and endurance with catastopic upheaval off the rictor scale. Outstanding heartfelt poem. May God continue to love you. You are a blessing to impart this poem.
Tommy L. Thomas, aka, Doctor T |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
4/4/2009 |
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| Liana, this is the most stirring poem I've read in a while. It is filled with a tragedy we've all heard about, but fortunately, many of us have not experienced. My heart goes out to you and anyone whose memories are based on the loss of family and friends to the Holocaust. |
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| Reviewed by David Thompson |
4/2/2009 |
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Liana, what powerful words you have spoken in your writing. I cannot imagine having to endure this kind of pain. It is beyond my scope of understanding as to how man is able to inflict this type of torture on other human beings and continue to live their lives as though nothing happened. May all your days ahead be filled with nothing less than contentment.
David Lee Thompson |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/28/2009 |
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A heart breakingly painful historical write
Love & Peace be with you eternally
William
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/17/2009 |
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Sad, painful, poignant, and very powerful, Liana. Love, peace, and healing to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/2/2009 |
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| another land, another people, another time, ravaged at the hands of the ignorant, powerful, and evil of the earth -- may peace and love find a place in your heart to dwell in great joy -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
1/29/2009 |
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A description of a tragedy, like a historic painting
and a good description of abusers and their falsity
in private matters as in historical events,
they are always the same.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
1/29/2009 |
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Those that start wars do it without a thought to the innocents that are caught in the crossfire, not only of the weapons but on the consequences.
Ossetia is not different to any other country desvastated by the power greed of a few, but Ossetia is the late one to suffer the consequences of the international inability to put and end to the ambitions of a few megalomaniacs men with ideas of self grandeur.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Sheri Hoff |
1/28/2009 |
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Liana,
Thank you for keeping the memory alive through your writing-so that we may learn-I pray for peace and kindness. Blessings
Sheri |
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| Reviewed by Theresa Koch |
1/28/2009 |
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| Painful and heartwrenching friend~`* |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
1/27/2009 |
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| Intense, powerful, the pain is palpable! Best, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
1/27/2009 |
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The myth of god has little to do with it, except to polarize thinking between the haters and hated. Man is cruel to his fellow man. As long as ignorance prevails, people will be persecuted.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
1/27/2009 |
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Liana~!
Very emotive and powerfully written prose - excellent!!
LOve and Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
1/27/2009 |
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Painful and so horrifying... my prayers are with you.
Blessed be those who suffer. |
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| Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson |
1/27/2009 |
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| A sobering poem of death and destruction. Out of the ashes of depravation, carnage and dispear, spirits arise to Gods kingdom. The poem is a tribute to all who have died there....M |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
1/26/2009 |
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| So much pain, Liana.....your words speak to the hearts of all who read them. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
1/26/2009 |
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| intense write- my soul feels the pain of those mothers-you have penned a powerful call for all to head |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
1/26/2009 |
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| Somalia is another case where the world is just looking but not acting. When God gave us free will it was for better or worse by those it was given to and with this free will we are responsible for our actions not God. We pray that this will get better but if it doesn't who is to blame? Where aid can be given we should all help to correct the problem but apparently this world as it's made up with leadership that flaunts everybody and does what it pleases is one that only total annihilation will be the answer in the end. |
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| Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU |
1/26/2009 |
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As long as they, "The the Industrial War's Engineers" backed up the United Nations Security Council enjoy their Plutocratic privileges to instigate social unrest, wars and terrorism... Let me stop here as people don't want to know who gives the orders in the United Nations.
Excellent composition. A true Paean singing for Justice.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
1/26/2009 |
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Such a sincere plea by a mother who has lost so much and still the world remains silent......
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
1/26/2009 |
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Your words Liana tear at my heart. I will keep you and so many in my prayers dear. Thank ylou for sharing.
Newfie Hugs and prayers, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Richard Orey |
1/26/2009 |
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Oh, what a heartfelt plea for God's intervention and help! I am brought to tears by the tragedy your words so eloquently describe for us in imagery that burns the soul.
I am but one small voice here in my country. But I will use my residency and rights of citizenship to call upon the leaders of the United States to lend support and assistance to little Ossetia. It's size does not reduce its urgent needs. And tonight I will add my prayers to those others of Authors Den who are so moved.
Thank you, my dear Liana, for sharing this powerful message with us.
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
1/26/2009 |
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| Oh Liana my heart is broken reading this and believe me, God Hears your prayers for he too is shedding tears. He gave us freedom of will but his will, will be the last. Those who have perscuted you and your people will have God's wrath brought upon them...know this is true. In the meantime keep praying and I will too. Love and hugs, Bonnie |
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