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DON’T WEEP, MY GUITAR
by Liana Margiva
Monday, February 23, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Poetry by Liana Margiva


What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…

He found me not and all my days
I spent without him and waited
When flowers bloomed on trees,
When rain did wash my tears away.

When yellow leaves were dying,
When snowflakes my solitude embraced.
Don’t crucify me, torture, lie to me, guitar,
That I was sought and missed

When during sleepless nights in misery’s embrace
I listened to the sweet talk of the stars
That ceased to be a dream and their twinkle
Would beckon me into another world
Where torment I’d forget.

Don’t weep, guitar, I understand
That cup of misery I must drink up
As fate has ruled. The days of life will fade
And I will leave this world
That happiness denied to my tormented soul.

Who would surmise that solitude like noose
Was strangling my heart?
That heart of mine that loved
For good unloved remained?

But I will gain my peace
I knew not under Sun
When I will cross the line
And fade away.

Don’t hurt that soul of mine, guitar,
The taste of love it has forgotten.
Don’t strain your strings
To lift it up to Heaven.

And don’t remind me that the Love
Remained a stranger to my tortured heart,
Remained a dream that never would come true ,
Afraid of fierce passion that was burning
Inside my lonely soul.

Don’t weep, guitar, let me forget
That for this soul which yearned for Love
Yet Love knew not, the life has gone.

Weep, my guitar, cry tears but don’t let
The Love forget that all my life
For Love I always longed,
That this was once the world
That I dwelt in!


Liana Margiva

Translated from Russian by Anatol Kardiukov

 




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Reviewed by Inspire Hope 10/19/2009
So heartfelt and very powerful, written with excellence!
an excellent work of beauty up lifting the lonely and the
sad! Thank you so much Liana for sharing and caring!


Much Love
Always!!
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors 10/17/2009
Excellent, excellent work, my guitar is weeping. Patrick
Reviewed by Connie Faust 6/23/2009
This melancholy poem quickly pulls the reader into its sad, lonely mood. Excellent, Liana!
Connie
Reviewed by Milton Handfield 5/12/2009
The guitar is a magnificent instrument. when i was growing up i was lonely, i had an old guitar and it became my best friend. This is a heart-felt poem.

take care
milton
Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu 5/8/2009
Very nostalgic,
your poems often turn the most terrible pain
into a refuge that is almost sweet.
(I think that beginning of line three should be "whose")

Axilea
Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury 4/4/2009
This is really so beautiful. Now I will picture guitars weeping!
Reviewed by Micki Peluso 3/30/2009
Wonderful poem!!! We have something in common--I am publishing my second book this fall. The first is a memoir of a lost child to DWI vehicular homicide but this next one is something I have always wanted to do--compile my short stories, slices of life and a few poems in a collection. It will be called, "Heartbeats . . .Slices of life". Perhaps when it's out we can do a book swap?

Best regards,

Micki Peluso
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 3/29/2009
This poem really has meaning for me as you pair your pain with the strains of a guitar. I can recall so many times in my youth when music was the comlement for the passions of my soul. They obviously are for you, too, in this heart-stirring poem.
Reviewed by Morning Star 3/26/2009
Liana this is so beautiful so symbolic and real!!
Reminded me of the song Tears on my guitar
Don't weep my guitar poem
Its stunning!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge 3/23/2009
Liana this touched my heart. Truly emotive and beautifully penned.
Reviewed by Keisha Helm 3/20/2009
Beautiful & powerful!
Reviewed by David Hightower 3/19/2009
Liana - Enjoyed your Don't Weep, My Guitar and it's lament at the sadness of life.Loved the opening lines:

What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…

and the acceptance of the last stanza:

Weep, my guitar, cry tears but don’t let
The Love forget that all my life
For Love I always longed,
That this was once the world
That I dwelt in!

-David


Reviewed by David Young 3/14/2009
Dynamic power of moving verse with the readers heart, and making them feel every word.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 3/13/2009
Symbolic and real; powerful with meaningful and moving expression... ...thank you for sharing this gift, Liana. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Dale Clark 3/3/2009
Beautiful work, grand expression of sorrow
and how music is healing, the guitar is healing.
Reviewed by kenny baez 3/2/2009
Beautiful guitar poem with a borrowed string from George Harrison's While My Guitar Gently Weeps.

Good poem to read aloud under a weeping willow tree while you gently strum a nylon acoustic guitar.
Reviewed by L. Figgins 3/2/2009
So pleased to meet you, Liana. You put into words what many feel in their souls, but can't describe. I like your use of the guitar as a vehicle to express sorrow...Lin
Reviewed by William Bonilla 2/28/2009
A fantastic poetic treasure
Thank you Liana For this beautiful jewel
Love & peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Bernice Angoh 2/27/2009
What a great poet you are my friend, I love your work, especially when you write of emotions, which you do so outstandingly. I love this.

"What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…"

That alone calls for a standing ovation
Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth 2/26/2009
Awesome poem that everyone can relate to.
Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley 2/26/2009
in the chords of poetic muse "DON’T WEEP, MY GUITAR" strums the heartbreak of ole...like a beautiful melodic song...begging to be sung
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie
Reviewed by Jon Willey 2/25/2009
love, sad, perplexing, evasive, enticing -- missed not when the guitar is strummed no more -- very beautiful poetry Liana -- much love and peace to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by E T Waldron 2/25/2009
Thank you for sharing this suprb poem! It is truly a masterpiece
of loves dilemma's!

Love,
Eileen
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 2/25/2009
Fantastic poem,I truly enjoy reading it,Great work all around
take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Robert Sheridan 2/24/2009
Liana~!

Definitely one of your best - so vivid and so beautiful!!


Hugs,

Lance
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 2/24/2009
You write so beautifully of sadness Liana, thank you for sharing your gift with us...

Carole~
Reviewed by Georg Mateos 2/24/2009
In the heart of that guitar are all the secrets of the poetess, when she cries the guitar cries, when she ask, the guitar gives a sad tune...like a poem telling of a longing soul that has forgotten the taste of a kiss and the warmth of a hug.
A poem full of humanity that's calling a name that only the author knows.
Exquisite.

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Wilson 2/23/2009
So touching, so sad...and so very beautiful, Liana.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 2/23/2009
sadly beautiful write-i enjoyed it!
Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle 2/23/2009
Powerfully and wonderfull written Liana. What an incredible gift you have. We are so lucky that you share it with us.

With Love,
Cindy
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 2/23/2009
Moving, touching, much too sad for this old heart, Liana...
but so beautifully done. -gene.
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 2/23/2009
What an amazing poem you have written. It touched my heart, Liana.
Thank you for this.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by George Carroll 2/23/2009
The inanimate objects that once consoled us but now are left without a tender touch. Marvelous metaphor which I used today in my poem, and the mountains cried. We were on the same wave length.


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