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| Reviewed by Inspire Hope |
10/19/2009 |
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So heartfelt and very powerful, written with excellence!
an excellent work of beauty up lifting the lonely and the
sad! Thank you so much Liana for sharing and caring!
Much Love
Always!! |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/17/2009 |
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| Excellent, excellent work, my guitar is weeping. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Connie Faust |
6/23/2009 |
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This melancholy poem quickly pulls the reader into its sad, lonely mood. Excellent, Liana!
Connie |
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| Reviewed by Milton Handfield |
5/12/2009 |
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The guitar is a magnificent instrument. when i was growing up i was lonely, i had an old guitar and it became my best friend. This is a heart-felt poem.
take care
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| Reviewed by Axilea Uzumcuoglu |
5/8/2009 |
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Very nostalgic,
your poems often turn the most terrible pain
into a refuge that is almost sweet.
(I think that beginning of line three should be "whose")
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
4/4/2009 |
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| This is really so beautiful. Now I will picture guitars weeping! |
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| Reviewed by Micki Peluso |
3/30/2009 |
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Wonderful poem!!! We have something in common--I am publishing my second book this fall. The first is a memoir of a lost child to DWI vehicular homicide but this next one is something I have always wanted to do--compile my short stories, slices of life and a few poems in a collection. It will be called, "Heartbeats . . .Slices of life". Perhaps when it's out we can do a book swap?
Best regards,
Micki Peluso |
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| Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper |
3/29/2009 |
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| This poem really has meaning for me as you pair your pain with the strains of a guitar. I can recall so many times in my youth when music was the comlement for the passions of my soul. They obviously are for you, too, in this heart-stirring poem. |
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| Reviewed by Morning Star |
3/26/2009 |
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Liana this is so beautiful so symbolic and real!!
Reminded me of the song Tears on my guitar
Don't weep my guitar poem
Its stunning!!!
Sending you Peace Love and Light.....Morning Star
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge |
3/23/2009 |
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| Liana this touched my heart. Truly emotive and beautifully penned. |
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| Reviewed by Keisha Helm |
3/20/2009 |
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| Beautiful & powerful! |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
3/19/2009 |
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Liana - Enjoyed your Don't Weep, My Guitar and it's lament at the sadness of life.Loved the opening lines:
What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…
and the acceptance of the last stanza:
Weep, my guitar, cry tears but don’t let
The Love forget that all my life
For Love I always longed,
That this was once the world
That I dwelt in!
-David
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| Reviewed by David Young |
3/14/2009 |
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| Dynamic power of moving verse with the readers heart, and making them feel every word. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/13/2009 |
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Symbolic and real; powerful with meaningful and moving expression... ...thank you for sharing this gift, Liana. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
3/3/2009 |
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Beautiful work, grand expression of sorrow
and how music is healing, the guitar is healing. |
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| Reviewed by kenny baez |
3/2/2009 |
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Beautiful guitar poem with a borrowed string from George Harrison's While My Guitar Gently Weeps.
Good poem to read aloud under a weeping willow tree while you gently strum a nylon acoustic guitar. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
3/2/2009 |
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| So pleased to meet you, Liana. You put into words what many feel in their souls, but can't describe. I like your use of the guitar as a vehicle to express sorrow...Lin |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
2/28/2009 |
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A fantastic poetic treasure
Thank you Liana For this beautiful jewel
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Bernice Angoh |
2/27/2009 |
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What a great poet you are my friend, I love your work, especially when you write of emotions, which you do so outstandingly. I love this.
"What do you weep about, my guitar?
Who left his soul behind inside you?
Who’s heart is weeping in unison?
Perhaps, you weep for me…"
That alone calls for a standing ovation
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| Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth |
2/26/2009 |
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| Awesome poem that everyone can relate to. |
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| Reviewed by Romantic Poetess Victoria L. McColley |
2/26/2009 |
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in the chords of poetic muse "DON’T WEEP, MY GUITAR" strums the heartbreak of ole...like a beautiful melodic song...begging to be sung
Much Love & Inspirations
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
2/25/2009 |
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| love, sad, perplexing, evasive, enticing -- missed not when the guitar is strummed no more -- very beautiful poetry Liana -- much love and peace to you my dear friend -- Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
2/25/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing this suprb poem! It is truly a masterpiece
of loves dilemma's!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/25/2009 |
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Fantastic poem,I truly enjoy reading it,Great work all around
take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Robert Sheridan |
2/24/2009 |
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Liana~!
Definitely one of your best - so vivid and so beautiful!!
Hugs,
Lance |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
2/24/2009 |
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You write so beautifully of sadness Liana, thank you for sharing your gift with us...
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/24/2009 |
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In the heart of that guitar are all the secrets of the poetess, when she cries the guitar cries, when she ask, the guitar gives a sad tune...like a poem telling of a longing soul that has forgotten the taste of a kiss and the warmth of a hug.
A poem full of humanity that's calling a name that only the author knows.
Exquisite.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Dawn Wilson |
2/23/2009 |
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| So touching, so sad...and so very beautiful, Liana. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/23/2009 |
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| sadly beautiful write-i enjoyed it! |
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| Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle |
2/23/2009 |
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Powerfully and wonderfull written Liana. What an incredible gift you have. We are so lucky that you share it with us.
With Love,
Cindy |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
2/23/2009 |
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Moving, touching, much too sad for this old heart, Liana...
but so beautifully done. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
2/23/2009 |
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What an amazing poem you have written. It touched my heart, Liana.
Thank you for this.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/23/2009 |
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| The inanimate objects that once consoled us but now are left without a tender touch. Marvelous metaphor which I used today in my poem, and the mountains cried. We were on the same wave length. |
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