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| Reviewed by jude forese |
4/7/2009 |
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| luv the structure and sentiment ... |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
2/21/2009 |
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You have captured all of my attention and taught me a lesson in poetry, Dawn. Truly a lovely and meaningful offering. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by William Haynes |
2/19/2009 |
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Yes, the love that exists within all
very nicely said
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
2/18/2009 |
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This transcends the beauty of the body for the beauty of what's inside and that is sooooo much longer lasting.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
2/17/2009 |
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| Beautifully expressed with passion. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/17/2009 |
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Wow, so very expressive and incorporates so much....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
2/17/2009 |
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I imagine being inside a red rose, smelling your perfume and feeling the velvet of your skin, and closing my eyes going to sleep by the beat of your heart as your lips softly kiss the rose.
Your poem inspires the poet inside a man.
Georg
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/17/2009 |
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Passionate and good poem,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
2/17/2009 |
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| Painted in vivid colors of passion. |
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