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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
6/30/2009 |
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Excellent poem,very well written,take care
EDWIN |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
6/29/2009 |
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I agree with George... damn good writing. Something you may take a look at is the font size you used. It may not accomodate the space needed for each line. That and 25 cent coffee won't get you far.
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
6/29/2009 |
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Chilling thoughts. You come through as a real poet's poet.
George |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
6/28/2009 |
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Undone by the power in these lines, K - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by L. Figgins |
6/28/2009 |
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That last line is the clincher! Like the last tick of a clock run-down. The pendulum just stops. A true power to this, K...
Lin
PS Paste from Word or Works. Forget the editor, unless you have plenty of aspirin |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
6/28/2009 |
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sweet... this is such an expressive write filled with emotion and love.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
6/28/2009 |
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Kim,
This has a decided sharpness, an edge not completely severe but definitely with the power to cut, and cut it does with great truth and honesty.
John |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
6/28/2009 |
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Intrnse writing makes a powerful poem with words that ignite!Good one KM...The editor is an enemy, I hate it! As for lines ,if you want to space up or down, hold the shift key and it will line up.
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
6/28/2009 |
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| THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN WORK THAT DEPECITS THE WRITER'S ANNOYANCE WITH A 'PROCASTINATOR'...WITH WHAT THE PROCASTINATOR OR THE WRITER MISSED. THNAKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
6/28/2009 |
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I find this particularly thought-inciding. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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