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Under Construction
by Douglas W Bentley
Wednesday, July 02, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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For Blue Eyes


Under construction  - of a moonlit sky  

Like a shooting star – too quickly flew by  

You danced in – began to silently cry  

I didn’t have to wonder - I knew why.

 

Quasars buzz by high - above the radar

Porsche parked in the garage – nice car

Soft burning candles were lit – table full

With glossy red lips you sit – beautiful.

 

You wink one eye

I think I’ll die

You close both eyes

I’ll start to cry.

 

Hand you a glass  – of surrogated wine

Wear your fur and lace  - looking mighty fine

The crane shut down for the night – out of sight

Work stopped: suspended  – turn on the night light.

 

Music blue - I whisper secrets to you

You blush, tell me to quickly hush – you do

Under construction - of a moonlit sky

Like a shooting star – too quickly flew by.

 

You wink one eye

I think I’ll die

You close both eyes

I’ll start to cry.

 

DWB©2008

 




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Reviewed by Regis Auffray 7/11/2008
A lovely songs whose lyrics echo in the soul of the reader; thank you for sharing this gift, Douglas. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by John Leko 7/5/2008
...wonderful expression...meets creative harmony...in all notes well penned here...blue eye shadows...and the wink of an eye...make great music.
good stuff here Douglas...
John
Reviewed by richard cederberg 7/4/2008
This must be a song Douglas. I love the chorus, if it is, or the refrain of the poem, if it isn't. Very touching, you romantic you. Gotta love that Alex Dihes below. Nothing superficial here though, just grade A American emotion.
Blessings ...
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 7/3/2008
Beautiful thoughts and raw emotions expressive of an evening well spent, yet savoring the moment....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron 7/2/2008
enchanting moment fluttering by like a magical butterfly
very lovely creation Douglas...ET
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 7/2/2008
Wow! This is more my style and I love the setup, the air, tastes and rustle of fine silk. I always have my pear;s. They go where ever I go and even in jeans.
This is wonderment and magic.
Susan


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