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The Stones that Cried Out
by Douglas W Bentley
Wednesday, June 10, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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The shoreline of the river was hauntingly familiar

Traces of the flood

What was. . . .

Were seen two-fold

One had a foot hold

The other ever so bold.

 

I was asked to take the first step

Would I accept?

Or fall back in line -- I would rather have crept

Would angels intercept?

Swords drawn

Just before dawn.

 

It’s the first tactic taught

I would pace up and down

All along the shoreline sought

Looking for a crossing fast

From the past

But nothing in this world lasts.

 

My eyes looked for yours

But in the haze of the morning

And the rising sun burning

All I saw were visions of grand illusion

My mind in a state of  disemboweled confusion

In front innumerable legions.

 

I felt like David before Goliath

Minus the courage -- without the faith

Empty shepherd's bag -- sling in pocket

The shoreline of the river was hauntingly familiar

Traces of the battle

Lie in -- the stones that cried out -- to be picked up.

 

DWB ©2009

 

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 6/30/2009
Fantastic work,excellent poem.Its always a pleasure reading your poetry

EDWIN
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 6/30/2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by William Bonilla 6/16/2009
Outstanding write, great imagery
Peace be with you

William
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 6/15/2009
Replete with symbolism, imagery, emotion and deep meaning; thank you for sharing, Douglas. Love and peace to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace 6/14/2009
Oh my...well done indeed sweet man..enjoyed...stay safe and well...Hugssss
Reviewed by Cryssa C 6/12/2009
Superb imagery that elicits deep feelings. Your poem brought me chills...good chills. :~)
Cryssa
Reviewed by OnepoetGem * 6/11/2009
great verse to be admired
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/11/2009
I am convinced now that it is in our suffering that we seek God most fervently. And it is in the challanges that we face, debilitating at times, that we are imparted wisdom and understanding that we would never otherwise receive in times of blessing and joviality. When my first wife walked out without any notice in 1996, leaving our son and me to fend for ourselves, I spent almost six months on my face, on the frontroom carpet, praying in the spirit and, oftentimes blubbering, for hours every day. The experience changed my life.

The heart-cry in this is evident.

Blessings ...
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/10/2009
So much emotion running raw through this, well done...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by E T Waldron 6/10/2009
Douglas,this is haunting poetry! Sort of like a hallucination
but with intense pain,being unable to find your way...my
heart goes out to you i pray all is well with you.Superb writing!

Love,
Eileen


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